Hello! Wow, this was one packed chapter, especially for only 800 some words! You did a wonderful setting up the characters of Molly and Jess, even if we only get to know them for a little while. I wasn't expecting the end of the chapter at all! But I think you wrote the whole sequence really well. I'm intrigued, and want to see where you go with this! Great job so far! 10/10 Cassie :)Author's Response: Thanks so much! To be perfectly honest, I didn't expect the ending either but it just kind of happened that way. I was trying to figure out how to end it and BOOM, I killed them! And to die on a bus, of all things. Thanks for the review, keep reading and I hope to hear from you again! ~Jess Report Review
Well this was fabulicous. I send you cyber-hugs!Author's Response: Thank you for your cyber hugs, I truly appreciate them! I'm working on the next chapter now so we shall soon be on our way into the world of fandom, pairings and cliches! -Jess Report Review
Nice story Jessy, I hope you and Molly will be ok, the Jessy I know would never want to die on a bus :PAuthor's Response: I'm sure we will be fine! Dying on a bus is so not cool :D Thanks for the review! -Jess Report Review
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