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Review #1, by Giant Hagrid Letters

17th November 2013:
Nice. But I'll be happy if don't take long to update each chapter! Please post next one soon!

Author's Response: Thanks heaps! I know, it's annoying but I've been really busy. Sorry and hope you keep reading

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Review #2, by Mackh Nothing

28th July 2013:
Well done! Great story line. When is the next part coming?

Author's Response: Unfortunately life has been getting in the way of me finishing the next chapter. Should be ready for validation in a week or so. Thanks so much, glad you like it!

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Review #3, by lauraf68 Nothing

24th June 2013:
Wow, Hogworts gone?? Doesn't seem possible. I'm a bit confused as to how the founders are to find their heirs and rebuild, plus how they will also help Harry survive Salazar. I'm very Interested in reading about your explanations. Very creative, definitely different ideas. Keep up the good work. Happy Writing! -Laura

Author's Response: Hey, yes hogwarts gone! I struggled to write that. I have my way of getting them to help harry, it will come out in the next few chapters. I'm thrilled you like my story. Thanks for the review!

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Review #4, by Avanell 2 Plans and romances

18th May 2013:
Great chapter...started here for some reason and now looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I hope you like what's in store.

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Review #5, by lauraf68 Honesty and Revelations

24th March 2013:
Hello ellennify,
Quite a little story going on here. Sorry didn't review last chapter, didn't see update until this chapter.

So Slytherin himself is out to get Harry now? Hmmm? Surely after all these years he can see what a maniac Voldemort turned into?

Very curious to know what Harry did with that photo. Thought it was odd for him to fly all the way to London, I know he is being secretive but that was dangerous. He could have asked Kreatcher for help getting there and would have been protected too. Guess Harry will always be a risk taker.

Keep up the good work, 8/10. - lauraf68

Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Yeah, for some reason Slytherin wants to continue Voldemorts work. I hope to make this clearer in the following chapters.
Harry needed to get out, but yes, perhaps Kreacher would have been a safer option. But harry isn't a logical thinker, is he? Haha

Thanks very much - Ellennify

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Review #6, by lauraf68 Home

27th February 2013:
Very intriguing first chapter. I have an idea of who the 4 people are, and I'm interested in your interpretation.
Even though I'm not a fan of Filch, I do hope he is OK. Happy Writing! ~~Lauraf68

Author's Response: Thank you :)
The four people will be named in the next chapter (almost finished)
I wonder what will happen to Filch :)

Thanks again! - Ellennify

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