Well, I like the story, but the last chapter didn't really "flow," if you know what I mean. Other than that, I love the story!

Author's Response: Thankyou, but I don't know whether you have realised that you have reviewed 4 times. Oh well. I understand about the chapter, it's not my favourite, but thanks for the review :D

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Well, I like the story, but the last chapter didn't really "flow," if you know what I mean. Other than that, I love the story!

Author's Response: Thankyou, but I don't know whether you have realised that you have reviewed 4 times. Oh well. I understand about the chapter, it's not my favourite, but thanks for the review :D

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Well, I like the story, but the last chapter didn't really "flow," if you know what I mean. Other than that, I love the story!

Author's Response: Thankyou, but I don't know whether you have realised that you have reviewed 4 times. Oh well. I understand about the chapter, it's not my favourite, but thanks for the review :D

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Well, I like the story, but the last chapter didn't really "flow," if you know what I mean. Other than that, I love the story!

Author's Response: Thankyou, but I don't know whether you have realised that you have reviewed 4 times. Oh well. I understand about the chapter, it's not my favourite, but thanks for the review :D

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Hey, so I just wanted to say how good your story is! I love all the characters and I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm shipping more things than I can handle, as well, but I always do that.

Author's Response: Thanks, I always have shipping problems. My problems usually involve things that don't usually end up together which them bums me out, but it's virtually impossible not to :D

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this is such a cute chick flick- so excited for the next chapter! bea xx

Author's Response: Thanks, I love chick flick types of things, so this is really fun to write :D

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I love this story so far!! I've never really read a fanfic that involves cliques before so this is really interesting to read. I'm interested to see what happens next -- update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks. I came up with the idea actually after watching mean girls. Then I thought I hadn't read a hp fanfic like that, so the thoughts started flowing. :D

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I like all the characters :) ! The story seems so interesting. I can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Author's Response: Thankyou. I am not sure how long the next chapter will be, but have got the basics sorted out :D

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Zara is my favourite character so far in this. I just find her pessimism so entertaining that I can't help but grin every time she does something violent or says something cynical.

Author's Response: I love writing her too, and i'm gonna have so much fun in the next chapter with some serious boy bashing. Violence is probably in her nature, and her dad is Zacharias Smith so snarky is just the way she is born.

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Obviously since it's only a couple of chapters into the story, you haven't been able to get into the plot yet so I am not sure whether I like or love the story. It seems pretty good though and I like how you have portrayed Ridley. I hope you update soon x

Author's Response: thankyou, the chapter has just recently been validated

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Dude I like this one to! You need to update and finish
as well as the sequel to the royal one.

Author's Response: I KNOW. I am so terrible at all this. I just need to get my act together and finish the next chapter, but I just keep getting distracted sorry. I hope I will update soon :D

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Omg! So goid, plz hurry to update and try to make the chapters a little longer? I really love this story so be quick :) xx

Author's Response: It is 4OOO or so words, and I don't really want to make them too long. But thankyou for the review, I will update soon, I just have some other stories I need to update as well.

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Is it just me but I'm picturing Ridley looking like Annasophia Robb in the Carrie Diaries when her big poofy hair was mentioned.

I just wanted to point out that you had a few grammatical errors throughout the chapter.

You also did a good job of steering clear of the stereotypical clumsy but not really clumsy character thing. Ridley really sounds like a clumsy person. I also loved that you didn't make her friends these perfectly gorgeous girls. I've seen that happen a lot and it's just really annoying so I was happy when I saw that wasn't the case.

Anyway, I really liked reading this chapter and I'll be waiting for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Sorry bout the grammatical errors by the way. I haven't actually seen Carrie Diaries, but I am actually planning on using Juno Temple to portray her.
My point of view is that perfectly gorgeous girls just don't really exist and if they did, they would not be that interesting. Only if they were part Veela would they really be beautiful. But the Chicks are sadly all beautiful. Just not her friends, yay!!

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I am really liking this story already. All of Ridley's friends seem awesome. Her family is hilarious as well, especially her mom. I love Ridley and how she is acting, she seems like a great character. I cannot wait to see where this plot goes. Please keep writing this and update soon so that I can read more.

Author's Response: I will try and update soon, but thanks for the awesome review :D

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I like it a lot, not love but its ok. I hope it`s happening a little bit more in next chapter, but I totally understand that you need some time to get the story running...:P Hope you update soon:)

Author's Response: I will as soon as I can. Hopefully the whole truth or dare game should happen soon. :D

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oh...cant wait to read this story. This should be interesting. please update soon, I really like were this is heading!

Author's Response: thanks, the next chapter is in the queue

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Interesting first! Wondering what's coming next... I'm putting this to favorites...

UPDATE ;)

Author's Response: Thank you. Next chapter is in the queue

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HURRY HURRY HURRY For A Second I Forgot That There Was Only One Chapter And I Was All Like: "LaLaLaLaLa Next Chapter Here I Come" and you know what happened? NO ARROW! *SOB*... I'm So... SAD! Please Make Me Happy And Update I Can Tell This Story Is Going To Be EPIC! 10/10

Author's Response: Awww, sorry bout that :D I will update as soon as I can, just still writing the story. Be Up Soon!!!

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I thought I'd be the first review on this so here I am! Moving on, for a beginning/Prologue -whatever you want to call it- this was actually pretty good.

I thought it was a really interesting beginning and the writing was great. I genuinely mean this when I say that I hope this story gets more reviews because it definitely deserves them!

If you do decide to continue writing this, I'll be very excited for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you, it's really nice to get such a positive review. I will be doing more chapters, but I am still in the middle of writing the next one.
I will update as soon as I can. :D

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