I absolutely love this story so very much. Please oh please update. Please. It would be greatly appreciated. You know, because i love this story. So very much.Author's Response: aww thanks. I really appreciate the reviews, and I'm so sorry to everyone who has been waiting. I'm just having a bit of a writers block at the mo, but that should get better soon. Thanks for the review. Report Review
I've read my fair share of fanfictions over the year and I must say that your stories are all very humorous and enjoyable. You have a way with words that creates a flow that is both easy and pleasing to read. I must admit though that I found a couple of grammatical errors here and there so it doesn't hurt to get someone to double-check a chapter before you submit it.
Furthermore, I decided to do my first review ever here on HPF, on this story because I really think this has potential and I do hope you update as quickly as possible.
Hope you found this review satisfiable!
/RemonAuthor's Response: Awww thank you so much for the totally awesome review. I have been a terrible clumsy grammar mistake addict recently, and for my new chapters will check them over quite a few times, just to make doubly sure.
The next chapter is partially written but I have been having some serious writers block with this story, having trouble getting it started. But hopefully it should pick up soon. Thanks again for the review and I'm really glad this was chosen for your first review. A big thankyou goes to you :D Report Review
ah! love it love it love it! can't wait for the next chapter!
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I quite like this! I want to see where this is going to go with Chelsea. Can't wait to read more!Author's Response: wooohoo. I'm glad you like it. It's always nice to get positive reviews :D Report Review
I love this. I like Royal Patience as well and I'm really looking forward to what's going to happen there.
But this is interesting. Even though I am a huge fan of Albus stories, I like James and Fred stories a lot as well. And this seems like it's going to be a good one. Chelsea seems to be really cool as well and I'm waiting to see what the other two girls will have to offer.
Definitely keep going with this :)Author's Response: I like James stories as well. I don't know exactly why, I just tend to like them better than Albus ones.
I hope to update soon :D Report Review
update soon luv it great start :) !Author's Response: thanks I will as soon as I can Report Review
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