This is so moving and intense and provoking. It's great- I love it. You've got a really great piece here- I'd love to see it expanded upon. You've captured Snape's bitterness so well. Keep writing. You're really talented :-)Author's Response: Thank you! I really enjoyed writing this one, it just kind of came to me in the middle of my english essay so I wrote this one and then went back - priorities! Thank you! Report Review
That was beautifully written :)Author's Response: Thank you so much! (: Report Review
Wow. This is really incredible. Deep and profound and... Just amazing. You are a brilliant writer. You should write your own stuff!Author's Response: Oh my gosh, that has to be the nicest thing anyone has ever written to me! Thank you so much, that's such a lovely thing to say, but I suck at novels! I've started two on here and I just get distracted and hate building up to stuff, I just want to get to the exciting bit quickly! I guess I'm better with one shots because I can just write the scene I'm picturing without having to build up to it and deal with tension and suspense, but I'll work on the other. Thank you! Report Review
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