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75 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Siggy Chapter Ten: Malfoy Mansion

22nd May 2013:
I just keep re reading this story, and I just have to keep reviewing. You my dear, are a marvelous writer. Such good characters. I usually cringe whenever Draco is nice in a story, but you've created a character background and a story that this Draco is able to thrive in. I really can't wait for the next chapter. I know I've already said that in my last comment, but I really can't.

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Review #2, by bookworm530 Chapter Ten: Malfoy Mansion

21st May 2013:
Aww I can't wait for Hermione to open her birthday present : ) and for Hermione and Draco to admit they like eachother.update soon!!!

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Review #3, by Trey Chapter Ten: Malfoy Mansion

21st May 2013:
I was just getting into it!! I'm so excited for what's coming next :) good chapter!

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Review #4, by Siggy Chapter Ten: Malfoy Mansion

21st May 2013:
Ah! You're a genius. I loved this line "Struggling won't get you anywhere. My nickname's Devil's Snare" and running into Astoria at the end? Ugh! You've got me hooked! When do you think the next chapter will be up?

Author's Response: lol i'm so glad you like it!! i'm working on the next chapter as we speak so it should be finished in a couple days and then it'll have to go through validation so check back early next week or at the end of this week.

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Review #5, by SassieNatash Chapter Ten: Malfoy Mansion

21st May 2013:
You can't just stop it there?! Write some more now!O:
Think this is one of the best Dramione ships I've ever read. You describe everything sooo good! Looking forward for the next chapter!:D
10/10

Author's Response: aw thank you so much! that means a lot! check back in about a week for the next update. thanks for the review!

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Review #6, by Dramione_4_ever Chapter Ten: Malfoy Mansion

20th May 2013:
Ooh wonder what'll happen now! I loveloveloved this chapter and XD Teddy's a Hufflepuff, that's so adorable! :)

Author's Response: thanks :) i'm really glad you loved it! check back soon for an update!

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Review #7, by DracoGal Chapter Ten: Malfoy Mansion

20th May 2013:
Right into Astoria?! Oh no! This chapter was really sweet. I think Mione is going to cave and move in with Draco! :) update soon!

Author's Response: haha that would be an interesting dynamic under the same roof. thanks for the review!

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Review #8, by NaughtyLittlePotato Chapter Ten: Malfoy Mansion

20th May 2013:
Aww! Draco and Teddy are so canny! I can't wait for the next chapter! Xo

Author's Response: thank you for the review!! :)

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Review #9, by Harveyboy Chapter Ten: Malfoy Mansion

20th May 2013:
Oh no what will Astoria say? Great cliffhanger.Draco and Teddys relationship is so special and I liked it when Teddy chose the Hufflepuff broomstick...just another great chapter...

Author's Response: thank you so much :) i'm glad you liked it!

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Review #10, by Yayy im a Hufflepuff Chapter Ten: Malfoy Mansion

20th May 2013:
awhhh I loved it so much it was brilliant!! Please update soon I can't wait to see what Astoria does. Please please please update soon!!!

Author's Response: i will i promise!! thanks for the review :)

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Review #11, by Chaserholly Chapter Nine: Babysitting.

11th May 2013:
Love it! Please update soon! Cant wait for the next chapter!! :)

Author's Response: thanks so much :) and thanks for the review!!

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Review #12, by Harveyboy Chapter Nine: Babysitting.

9th May 2013:
So glad I found your story...you never fail to make me smile...great chapter, lots of great ideas...update soon!
Hope your schoolwork is going well, don't worry it's almost summer...

Author's Response: haha my school work will be over in about a week and a half! I cannot wait!!! thanks for asking! and thanks for the review :) i love each and every one of them :)

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Review #13, by Mal Chapter Nine: Babysitting.

9th May 2013:
I want more! I really love your story! Pls update soon. Thank you! :)

Author's Response: thanks :) I'm glad you're enjoying it! and thank you for the review. i really appreciate it!

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Review #14, by SydneyBlack Chapter Nine: Babysitting.

8th May 2013:
OH MAN.
I wonder how Hermione will react...
Really, really, REEEAAALY good :)
10/10

Author's Response: thank you so much :) check back soon to find out!

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Review #15, by Siggy Chapter Nine: Babysitting.

8th May 2013:
I love your writing style. Love love love. So excited for the next chapter. I'd rate you 20/10 but that's not possible.

Author's Response: thank you so so so much :) that means a lot to me. and thank you for the review!

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Review #16, by Dramione_4_ever Chapter Nine: Babysitting.

7th May 2013:
Eek they're moving in together!!! :) :) :) can't wait. Loved this chapter just like all the others, and I'm eagerly looking forward to the next!

Author's Response: aw yay!!! lol thanks for the review :)

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Review #17, by DracoGal Chapter Nine: Babysitting.

7th May 2013:
Oh? How is Hemione going to react to that? I love how their situation is getting more and more complicated. It seems like it's going to get to the point where they actually fall in love ;) I can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon! :)

Author's Response: The next chapter is halfway written so it should be up within the next week so stay tuned! :) thanks for the review!

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Review #18, by SumayyahGranger19 Chapter Eight: Sleep Overs and Disasters

4th May 2013:
I love the storyline! When is the next chapter coming out?! You're an amazing writer :D x

Author's Response: hi! thanks for the review :)

I am working on the next chapter as I write this response so it should be finished within the next week or two. (I should really be studying for finals but oh well lol).


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Review #19, by albuslilyjamespotter Chapter Eight: Sleep Overs and Disasters

23rd April 2013:
Amazing!!! I love this story!! Please post the next chapter :)

Author's Response: aw thanks so much :) i'll post it up as soon as i possibly can! i promise!

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Review #20, by Dramione_4_ever Chapter Eight: Sleep Overs and Disasters

17th April 2013:
Okay, so as you can see, I am a new reader to this story and so far I have been completely blown away. I was first attracted to it because Tangled Web was the working title for a new Romione/Dramione that I was planning and also because of the entertaining summary. However, I never could find the time to read until now, and this has become one of my favorite fanfics along with some that have mass followings like The Other Reality, Playing House With Malfoy, and Unforgiven. I think that this story's selling point is its freshness, which shines in your writing, your characters, and your plot. Your style of writing is amazing. Everything flies so well and there's a certain charisma to each sentence. You don't leave out descriptions, and yet you don't do an overkill and describe everything to the last detail. Also, your characters are so believable. They may be OOC from what we saw of them in the novels, but it's hard to not accept them the way you portray them. You MAKE us want to gush over this considerate Draco who's a good person, to cry with Lucuis for everything he's been through, to yell at Ron for being the bastard that he is, to agree with Harry's acceptance of the situation, to adore Teddy's antics, to hope for Cooper to be okay, to be there with Hermione in every single emotion that she feels. And your plot! It's simple, yet complex. It's a lot to take in, but you present it so well. It al makes sense, nothing is too wacky, you always leave us readers wanting more, and make us emotional with every new plot twist. I hope that you don't ever consider giving up on this story (or writing in general, seeing as you're an amazing author) and that it eventually reaches the huge fan following it deserves to have.

Best of luck for the future,
Dramione_4_ ever

Author's Response: oh my goodness. my mind got blown with this amazing, thoughtful, and flattering review. thank you so much for taking the time to review all of my chapters and for leaving this detailed comment, as well. I really appreciate it.

I'm so thrilled that you like my writing (I've been working hard to make it better from my first fic). that keeps me wanting to write, knowing that readers appreciate something that i've worked hard to get better at as I've grown. and also, I am so so so flattered that you like my character portrayals and plot. I always try to keep the base of the characters the same so that they have a hint of a shadow of the real characters from the books/movies. I hope that shows in my writing.

and it's funny you should mention The Other Reality and Playing House With Malfoy because those were the last two fics that I was obsessing over on hpff (so much so that I would call my friends to tell them what each new chapter was about lol). so I'm so excited that you compare my story to those stories.

thank you again for such considerate reviews. I really appreciate them as a (wannabe) writer.

I'll be updating as soon as finals are over in the next few weeks so please check back soon :)


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Review #21, by Dramione_4_ever Chapter Seven: Double Date

17th April 2013:
You're really good with cliffhangers, you know that? Everything seemed to be going well with dinner...

Author's Response: phew! I'm glad you think so. sometimes I feel like I'm way too cliche lol. thanks for the review (again)!

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Review #22, by Dramione_4_ever Chapter Six: Red Wine and Candle Light

17th April 2013:
I think their game is really interesting and XD that last line.

Author's Response: I had to add a little romance to set the flame ;)

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Review #23, by Dramione_4_ever Chapter Five: Knight In Shining Armor

17th April 2013:
Aww Draco is so caring and yay Cooper is getting better!

Author's Response: your reviews make me so happy! lol thanks for another one :)

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Review #24, by Dramione_4_ever Chapter Four: Setting the Story Straight

17th April 2013:
Oh that cliffhanger... I love Draco and Hermione's backstory, it's so adorable :)

Author's Response: thank you, thank you very much :)

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Review #25, by Dramione_4_ever Chapter Three: A Deal With The Devil

17th April 2013:
And the Tangled Web begins. That said, I love the way this chapter played out.

Author's Response: thank you :) it was one of my favorite to write since it's a Teddy chapter.

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