I don't know what to say. This is just a really amazing and wonderful *fluffy* one-shot. :D And the fact that my name is up there in the author's note...wow. I feel so special, right now. All thanks to you. ♥
Fluff-wise, I'm pretty sure you hit the perfect mark in the story. There's just an overload (in a good way) of fluff in the story! I love how you gave us a flashback of Percy proposing to her. I was grinning so much at that bit (and throughout the rest of the story) that my cheeks hurt by the end of it. I completely love the story!
My favourite bit of the story though is this:
"And this close I can count all the freckles on her cheeks, see the flecks of green in her eyes, and hear her shallow breathing. And my heart swells with the amount of love I have for her..."
I couldn't even breathe properly anymore because I was just getting all the fluff feels in that part. Ugh. You are an amazing writer, thank you so so so much for writing this! You honestly have no idea how much you made my day (and probably my life) with this amazing, fluffy one-shot. ♥ ♥
This is so definitely (and obviously) going into my favourites. Something I'm sure will get my spirits back right up if they are ever down. Again, thank you so much for writing this! :D
PS: I'm very excited to read the next chapter of Break The Night! ;)Author's Response: IZZY!! HEY!!
Aww, you are special Izzy!! Shucks *hugs* :D
I just can't comprehend right now how amazing of a review this is. And how amazing you are. ♥
Again, I just don't know what to say. I'm just SO glad that you love it!! :D And coming from you, the person who inspired me to write it, is just such a major compliment. :)
OMGOD. That is probably the best para of a review I've ever received. I hope you know that. And right now, I just feel so... loved. And it feels so good. Coming from a person who is quite an introvert, socially speaking, and would rather spend her time reading/writing instead of going to that party, and really never gets appreciated all that much for what I do, it means a lot that someone, even though you probably live halfway across the world, loves me, and a reflection of me. And that's not a feeling I get a lot, so thank you. For everything. You are amazing. And right now I just want to give you such a big hug ;)
No Izzy, thank you so much for inspiring me to write this, and for reading this. Ugh. I think I'm going to cry.
Anyway, just ugh. THANK YOU *supermassivehug*
P.S. Now I shall be completely motivated to get it finished and in the queue by the end of the week ;)
This is such a sweet story! I was smiling to myself the whole time. I like how you properly portrayed how nervous the poor kid was when he proposed to her. That's the most terrifying moment in every guy's life, and some writers brush it off.
I also like how he's a family man, looking back at their start. It's very intriguing.
Thanks for the nice read for an otherwise boring Saturday afternoon (sorry, I'm horrible at reviewing)!
soapman333Author's Response: Hi There!!
I'm so glad that you enjoyed it!! I did try to emphasise that he was really nervous and I'm really happy that it came off well!!
Oh, don't worry about it. Glad I could help ;)
And you definitely aren't horrible at reviewing!! Never doubt yourself!! Every reviewer's style is different, and you've captured what you feel into a concise review, whereas some others (like myself at times) struggle!! So really, you have a talent ;)
Thank you for your lovely review!! :P
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I'm finally here with one of you reviews! I know it's not on a story you requested yet but I saw your status and thought I'd come and check this out!
This was so sweet and lovely and has filled me up with lots of warm fuzzies! Just what I needed! Since reading fanfiction Percy has become one of my favourite characters to read by far and you really captured him in a good place in his life.
The flashback to when he proposed worked amazingly well and I loved it. Everything about this worked though and definitely brightened my day!
I haven't got any CC or anything, I just really enjoyed it!
Lauren :)Author's Response: Hey Lauren!!
Don't worry about it, I'm just glad that you enjoyed it!!
Awww, thank you!! Glad I could help. Fluff cheers me up anyday too. Percy is one of my favourite characters as well!! I purposely wanted to write about a time in his life when he's really really happy, because we usually never get to see that side of him.
I'm glad you loved that bit!! That was my favourite bit to write, I just couldn't stop smiling.
Thank you so much!! You have no idea how much it means to me when you say that you have no CC. It makes me feel all gushey inside knowing that you truly enjoyed it, and that there is nothing that you would change. And that's a feeling that every writer loves to feel. So thank you.
Thank you so much for such an amazing review.
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