3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by UnluckyStar57 A Reunion at the Burrow

21st March 2013:
Aloha! You requested a review from me over a month ago... Yikes, I'm really late, and for that, I apologize!!

Now, down to the review:

I loved the beginning. It was quite descriptive and wonderful. I really enjoy a story when the description is spot-on, and you've got that down!

I think you wrote Harry quite believably, except for when he defied Uncle Vernon... That was quite out of character for him, but it actually gave me a good sense of how he differs from J.K. Rowling's depiction of him. And personally, I'm not a huge fan of the Harmony ship... I'm kind of a Romione purist... But it's pretty cool that you've got a little awkward romantic element in there!! (I only say awkward because it's Harry and Hermione... How can they NOT be awkward?!) :)

Excellent first chapter, and I hope you don't hate me for taking so long to review!! :)


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Review #2, by HolyCricket A Reunion at the Burrow

16th February 2013:
Hey! I saw your post on the forums, so here I am! You're a Harmony shipper, which is great because I am too! The was a very well written chapter; the descriptions, dialogue, and character (I've just lost the word) thingys were written very well. The way the characters act around each other- that's what I'm trying to say. Anyway, great job, and I'm looking forward to more! :)


Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you liked the chapter. I've been trying to focus a lot on the character development and the relationships and interactions between the characters so I'm happy that came through.

I have loads more chapters written (over 50 pages worth) but am just waiting on validation. If you'd like I can email them to you and you can catch up on the story in real time. I'd love to hear your opinions.

Thanks again for reading!

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Review #3, by GrangerDanger76 A Reunion at the Burrow

16th February 2013:
Hey! My name is Camille from the forums! I saw your post in the RC Common room and thought I'd check your story out!

So first off, your writing is just lovely, it's so professional and mature that I would honestly pick this up and read it if it was a published book. I love the way you've developed Harry's character, and I guess you're a Harry/Hermione shipper huh? :) I quite liked the interaction between Harry and Dumbledore but also between him and the Dursley's because while it is somewhat cannon, you're putting your own spin on it which is unique and refreshing. I really really enjoyed reading this chapter, and will definitely come back once the others were validated. Your writing is so very good and I hope your proud of your first chapter.

Overall, I didn't see any typos, but then again, I am no beta. :) But good work there, you probably actually proof read!

But really, great job on this chapter, I can't wait to see you around the forums, and read more of your story!


Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked the first chapter. I've written loads more, but validation takes longer than I'd hope sometimes. If you are interested, I can email you the other chapters I have written so you can read it all now.

I actually don't proofread at all. I right all of my chapters really late at night while I'm just trying to find something to do (clinically diagnosed insomnia does wonders for my writing), then I just save them and post them after maybe one read through. I know that's not the best tactic, but I do edit as I write. I cannot for the life of me leave a typo sitting with the logic that "spell check will catch it later". OCD ftw.

Thanks for reading and I can't wait for you to see the rest of the chapters!

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