Reading Reviews for The Dark Lord's Daughter
5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Tina Truth or Dare?

5th April 2013:
This was great so far, loved reading it. Hope you continue to write more!

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Review #2, by dreamer21 Truth or Dare?

3rd March 2013:
Fun Game. Lol
Keep writing xx

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Review #3, by Violetwing All Aboard the Hogwarts Express

22nd February 2013:
Pretty good, but you also need to remember to add punctuation at the end of every sentence, even if it's just a comma. Just quickly skim over it to check. :)

Author's Response: Thank you for all your reviews, they made my day! :) the next chapter is just waiting to be validated and I have the next few chapters after that all lined up as well so please tell me what you think of those if you have time. I'll edit the noises/end of sentences etc at some point but I'll leave it a bit because I'm more interested in getting some more chapters up here first! When I have a sec I'll fix all that, thank you for pointing them out! Ellie x

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Review #4, by Violetwing Platform 9 3/4

22nd February 2013:
Pretty good, I just have a suggestion. That when a loud noise is heard like, *crack*, it should be in italics with no stars.
But otherwise very good, quite short for my taste. But very good. :)

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Review #5, by Violetwing Prologue

22nd February 2013:
Pretty good prologue, I'll keep reading because my curiosity is getting the better of me! 10/10! :3

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