This was great. As for Anni going to the party, I don't want her too cause it can't end well, but at the same time it will make a great chapter. I suppose she's got to face her fears and maybe some of the Weasleys will change their minds about Anni, and the things Dominique lied about. Update soonAuthor's Response: Thanks! There's definitely mixed feelings about Anni going to the party. You'll just have to wait and see ;D Thanks for reviewing! ~ Janelle(: Report Review
Dom like Lysander ...
If I was her, I wouldn't go to the party because of any humiliation.. but I kinda want her to go anyway :D can't wait for more !!Author's Response: Yeah, notice how she completely declined it straight off the bat when Angelina invited her, but she still may go... you never know!;D I'm glad you like it and also glad you caught on! ~ Janelle Report Review
I really adore this story, I can't help but want to learn more! Ugh, now you've put Tyler into the mix I can't help but be impatient! You're a really gifted writer, and you're plot is carried out very well! Tyler sound wonderful, and for all the other chapter.well I love them! I love this whole story...oh I've mentioned that before. anyway, keep on writing and don't be discouraged at all! Can't wait for the next chapter! The party's gonna happen then right? Please say yes! :D
I would really like it if you would check out my stories, it would be great to have such a really talented writer look at them, and give me an honest opinion.
Thanks a billion for this chapter, and I'll try to review more frequently! :D xxAuthor's Response: Thanks so much! I loved hearing that you enjoy my story so much! I have to say I admire you, however, for your story 'Daughter of Earth'. I love it. I appreciate the comments and admiration you have for my story, and the party may or may not happen;D . You'll just have to wait and see! Thanks! ~ Janelle Report Review
WOW. I immediately loved it. well, not IMMEDIATLY, but basically. I thought it was an 'during Hogwarts' period, and I usually don't like 'after Hogwarts' stuff, but by the end of the first chapter I was hooked. This is (as of now) one of my favorites!!! :DAuthor's Response: Thanks! I wanted to do something different, other than 'During Hogwarts'. It's all you really ever see. I'm glad you love it, and I hope you continue to read it!(: ~ Janelle Report Review
You're a softball player? Me too! It's my life! And I love the story!!!Author's Response: Haha, yeah, I am. I'm a lefthanded first basemen and pitcher! It's my life too! And thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it!(: ~ Janelle Report Review
I really love this story. I've read a lot of fanfiction and I have to say this my favorite of them all. If you could please update soon that would truly be amazing. I'm on break and have nothing really good to read. And if you updated I would have something fantastic to read!
~ DayLilyAuthor's Response: Thanks! I'm halfway through the next chapter in revising and editing!(: ~ Janelle(: Report Review
So James used to have a crush on Anni... Well that just adds a lot more drama to this situation especially since they will basically be living together soon... You also need to explain what these things Dom said are because it is killing me and I really just want to know what they are. Anyway please update soon!Author's Response: Of course I had to add to the drama! Haha. And Dominique's story will come in due time. It'll piece itself together through time. Just pay close attention to details and it'll show itself to you. I'm planning on updating soon! Thanks for reviewing! ~ Janelle (: Report Review
I loved it a lot. The characters and the plot is just great. I can't wait for you to write the full story and have it all out it sounds wonderful right now especially from Jame's view but I can see why you would have in in 3rd persons point of view. Keep writing Janelle you have a wonderful gift so far its awesome. [:Author's Response: thanks so much!!! I really appreciate you enjoying this story and hope you continue to enjoy the rest of it!(: ~ Janelle Report Review
James's pov was really cool. I liked getting to know
him better. And drunk/hungover Albus seems like fun
Thank for updating!!Author's Response: Thanks! I figured I may as well throw James POV in, because it seemed fuzzy when I read over about him. And yeah, I wanted to throw Al in there to build into the past.
Might as well make it enjoyable, yeah?(:
Thanks for reading and reviewing again, I appreciate it deeply! ~ LilyLou(: Report Review
This story is awesome! Please keep writing and updating!Author's Response: Thanks! No doubt I will!(: ~ LilyLou Report Review
I adore it! Please please please update soon! This is just so intriguing, I want to know more about Dom and how they stopped being friends and what Dom said and just, everything! :)) Don't stop writing, I beg you, and I promise I won't stop reading! Deal? ;) xxAuthor's Response: Ahaha I promise I'll get around to telling you what Dom did!(: I definitely plan on continuing and am glad you like it so much! Thanks! ~ LilyLou Report Review
I really like this. I like that it's out of Hogwarts and I also like the plot a lot. I don't think I have seen anything similar to this plot yet. So definitely keep going and you have at least one regular reader :)Author's Response: Ahh, thanks!!! I'm really glad you like it! I was aiming for something unique, and I'm glad it was a success! Ill update soon!(: ~ LilyLou Report Review
I really loved it! Can't wait for the next chap!
I'm actually writing a new story too called Quidditch Notoriety (by honorary_weasley)... Would you mind leaving a review of what you think so far? Thanks.
And please update soon, because I really love your writing style. And James is in it, which is great, since he's my favorite next gen character!Author's Response: Thanks SO much! I'll take a look at your fic!(: I'm glad you liked my writing style so much and James is one of my top favorites, too. Thanks for reading and I'll update soon!(: ~LilyLou Report Review
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