Oh boy, I see ridiculousness ensuing throughout this story. Very silly :D
I've never figured out how the whole fantasy league works so it's funny I'll be kind of learning about it through Quidditch :P
I'm loving that Rose just got a great big favor from him just like that, I wonder what that will turn out to be :)
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Great chapter! :) I really like Rose! She can keep up with all the guys and she never lets anyone push her around. She's just so cool! I love the humor in this story too. :) Update soon please!
P.S. This is still hpluvr, I just got a new account and name. Report Review
So, I am very into this story. Its witty, comical, and very different. I haven't seen anything like this on HPFF (and I've been on it for a while). I love the fact that you designed it after the show, the League. if that's what you did...which I'm very sure you did... anyways, brilliant! Keep it up:D Report Review
Happy April Fool's!!
Oh my goshh. This was the absolute WORST day to decide to read your story for the first time!! It seems great but I can barely understand it thanks to this prank. It took me a while to get it too. I was freaking out that someone had hacked you or something but then I finally caught on! Hahaha whoever did this is very clever. I guess I'll just have to wait till tomorrow to read it coherently! :) At least I hope it'll be gone by then!!Author's Response: Happy April Fool's too!!! I'm glad I haven't been hacked, and even more glad that I still have you reading my stuff! I hope you come back too and find that the story is still good even without the staff's lovely sense of humor! THANK YOU! Report Review
Love this. It's funny (so funny), clever, original.. If I had a bit more time I could write entire paragraphs about how it simply makes me smile :) Can't wait for more!Author's Response: Oh, I'm so glad you're enjoying it! What a sweet review. I like to think that I'm funny and clever at times, so it's nice to hear that someone else thinks so too. Thanks for reading! Report Review
Cute, not something I've seen before and I like it. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter. 10/10Author's Response: Thanks! I try to be original, so that means a lot! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Report Review
Another great chapter! I really love reading this story, it's a nice change from all the angsty one-shots I read a lot of. It's so funny and light hearted but there's still substantial plot development each chapter. You're a brilliant author!
I'm excited to see where Rose's involvement in the League goes! And what was up with Seth and her in the corridor? Do I spy romance in the future?? :P
I really like Cody and Hugo so far, though I haven't put my finger on why exactly. Thanks for the great chapter, I'm looking forward to reading more! :)
- FaithAuthor's Response: A brilliant author? Don't know about that, but totally flattered that you think so! What was up with Rose and Seth in the corridor? He snorted at the word "romance" when I asked him, but I'll keep you posted if he gets it together. Thanks for giving this new story a chance and being such a great reader and reviewer! Report Review
I'm amused at how I really enjoy your story, and yet I don't really know anything about fantasy football etc. I mean, I've heard of it, obviously, but I think it's more of an American thing (I'm British...)
2 chapters and I already love Seth (particularly with Rose - Reth, Sose, Roseth or Serose?) and James, and Hugo. And you know, all of them. Incidentally will Lysander be making an appearance?
As for The Oliver (love the capitalised The), it made me imagine the Oscars. Was that intentional?
Also, hehee, blagging rights...
In short, thanks for starting to write a story I know I'm going to love :) I can't wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: Don't worry. Fantasy Football is mostly ridiculous and silly, hence why I thought it would make a good humor story. Besides, Lorcan and Hugo don't know what's going on either, so you can learn with them! I like Roseth I think for the couple name; really merges them together. Though, we'll have to see if they can get it together enough to actually...be together. I don't think I was thinking about The Oscars when I named The Oliver, but I did watch them recently, so maybe it was working from a back, secret place of my mind. Blagging Rights..you have NO idea how proud I am of that. Thanks for all your AWESOME words and taking the time to both read and review! You rock my socks. Report Review
I must say I love that the trophy is called 'The Oliver'
I love this story! The boys chemistry and jokes and one liners at each other is so brilliantly done.
I laughed so much at the idea of James dragging the mirror, I think he's my favourite character :D
This is such a great idea for a story and I can't wait to read more!Author's Response: I figured the trophy needed a name, and I'll get a little more into its history next time around. I'm glad you are enjoying this story; I love writing from the male perspective, and I love the chance to make people laugh! James might be my favorite too, I'm making him into such a jerk, but he makes me laugh the most. More will be on the way soon! Report Review
I love Seth already! The whole concept is very refreshing and I found myself laughing often, good job! :) xxAuthor's Response: I'm sure he thanks you for that! I'm glad I scored some laughs, that's exactly what I was after! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review! Report Review
I really loved this! It's a bit different than what I usually read but it was a really nice change!
The dialogue was pretty realistic and I especially liked Hugo and Cody's lines. You write humour really well to! I've always been scared to try it because I'm really not funny :P but I thought you did really well!
Great opening chapter, I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next! Awesome job!
- FaithAuthor's Response: Yay, first review! I wrote this story completely for me. I wanted to write a fun, goofy comedy (just the sort of thing I need this time of year) but wasn't sure if anyone in the world would actually want to read it or find it the least bit entertaining. Thank you so much for taking the time, not only to read this, but to leave such a great review! Thank you SO much! Report Review
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