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Review #1, by heartjily4ever the one with the injury

31st May 2013:
So this is a good start, I'm looking forward to seeing what will happen next. There are a few spelling and grammar mistake which you might want to check out, but apart from that it's good. I'm a sucker for back grammar as well, so I know what it's like. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

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