updateupdateupdate! i want to know what happens net! :) i love this story and im really enjoying reading about your characters. i do hope you update this soon!
~M

Author's Response: oh i wish i could update soon!
i've got so many complications (exams, sports, and school-related-turn-in-your-laptop things) that are gonna prevent me from updating for a long time :( :( i'm so sorry! all is explained better in an updated version of chapter 10.
thanks for reading!
xoxo
Jils

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i just stumbled on to this story, and I'm so glad that i did! you're a great writer, and you're very skilled with words. I'm enjoying reading this story so far :)
Your main character reminds me quite a bit of the main character from my story, Werewolf's Trace--who happens to be Dominique Weasley, ironically. Anywho, I really do like this story and I love the way you've written Ella. I look forward to reading more!
~M

Author's Response: Thanks for the lovely review! Dom sends her greetings to her alter ego
xoxo
Jilly

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Go go gryfindor :) yay!

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That was a close call :) I mean I would have not been albe to run that far !! Also Woolongong is not stupid ! I live about a hour away from there!!! :P

Author's Response: hahaha Finn would like to point out that he was not intending to insult the place, he just found the name amusing. Ella is glad that you appreciate her ninja skills. she's been practicing.
Thanks for the reviews! xoxo Jils

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Oh emmazing :) I love the fact that Ella managed to go full out'ninja'!

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i am only updating this chapter because i am angry that you took so long. all the same it is the best fan fiction on this site by a long shot.
10/10

Author's Response: as i (think) i mentioned at some point, i've been very busy with school (it's finals week) and sports (districts for track) so i can't procrastinate and write anymore :( hopefully i'll be able to get back to writing in about two weeks or so. until then, hang in there and don't get angry! but thanks for the review!!!
xoxo
Jilly

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Loved it! Bit more romance/fluff than previous chapters, but still nice. I was so happy to see that you updated. MORE! PLEASE!
But yeah, I'm anxious to see the boys' reactions to her little situation. Can't wait!

Author's Response: thanks so much for the lovely review! i can't wait to write about it!
xoxo
Jils

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I absolutely love Finn! Favourite character he is so cute with Ella! I love her relationship with Dom and Rose and finally I just adore this story!

Author's Response: aww thank you! so glad you love it!
xoxo

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asdfghjkl i love this so much! im so glad that there was more ella and dom stuff in this chapter, i kind of felt like ella had been neglecting dom and just hanging out with the guys? maybe that is just me :s I'd love ella and finn together though! they have such an awesome dynamic :) update soon because i literally just read this whole thing in an hour and yayay you are fab for writing this

Author's Response: Glad you picked up on that! the point of this chapter was to add to ella and dom's relationship, and introduce rose's character. so glad you loved it! I'll update in a few weeks once my finals are done :(
xoxo
Jilly

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Not much to say. Perfection, as always.

Author's Response: aww thanks!!!

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SCREAM!!!

It was that hilarious.
And epic.
And awesome.
Merlin, I want you to update soon!
I don't really like Chase. I think he's a player.
Ella thinking when Chase was kissing her made me crack up.

-sigh-

I'm gonna go read it again!

Author's Response: thanks!
xoxo Jilly

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Hello!
So it's a wee bit late right now and I'm very tired so please excuse moi if this review doesn't make sense...

INDUSTRIAL-SIZED NUTELLA JARS?
One word: lifesaver.

So, I thought it was quite funny that Ella refused to drink at the party, and how she tried to take drinks off everyone... "Make good choices!" Heh heh.
Davies kissed Ella. Hmmm. Personally I don't really like him, but I'll see where Elvies is going. (Haha genius nickname!)

Sorry this is a short and nonsensical review!:-(

Miss Moneypenny :-)
P.S I did like the chapter, BTW. Just in case we hadn't cleared that up.
*Penny falls asleep*

Author's Response: thanks for another lovely review!!! Yeah, Ella is basically me again in this chapter... and all the other ones... sometimes (i hope...) lots of elipses (is that the word? spelling? idk)
xoxo Jils

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Thank you for this chapter. I really love that you included alcohol in it, but was adamant about Ella not drinking. Personally I think too many HPFF stories include party scenes where characters get way drunk, and I just don't think that stuff would go on at Hogwarts to that degree...
I think you did a good job setting up drama for the next chapter. It's pretty obvious that Chase is a player and makes Ella doubt her feelings for him, but I still feel like the whole thing is going to end up with her brokenhearted. Maybe Finn will be there to comfort her ;)
All in all, good job. Your chapters are so easy and fun to read, so I'm sad that you won't be updating soon, but I completely understand all the stress that goes with year-end finals and sports events!
P.S. Have you considered going to The Dark Arts to request a banner? I keep wanting to have a visual for Ella!!

Author's Response: thank you thank you thank you!
i've been thinking of getting a banner, but i'm not too technologically skilled... also i don't really want anyone else to be depicting my characters except for me/or without my input/ constant commenting...
thanks again for reading!
xoxo
Jilly

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Guiuiuiuiuiuiuiuiuiui (yes, every time i post a new review you will have to privilege of being introduced to an amazing new onomatopeia... no need to thank me :P)

Do you how much i love you? ... or at least your stories??? These last few chapters may have been "fillers" but i love them so much! The fact that they ARE fillers makes the plot so much more smooth and realistic!

This is so much fun to read! The kidnapping plan was... should i say... GENIUS! I wish i had the guts (and probably the magic :P) to pull a stunt like that! That was so funny. And the whole illegality of the quidditch game... PERFECT. Need i say more? Yes. I do.

Yeah, *with a deep and gutteral voice* ... rghum rghum... yeah um... i'm a very nonfangirlygirl right now who's not jumping off her seat having so much fun reading. Yeah, ummm. i'm not obsessed with your story and yeah. rghum rghum ... (that was kind of awkward. i apologize profusely :S)

Ok. where do i go from THAT! SOooo. i loved this chapter! Ooh! Yeah and i almost forgot!! (urh... have such a tiny memory!!!) I love that the guys know about Ella's crush! This should be fun... i'm sure they'll think of something to put them together or maybe embarrass her or something. CANNOT WAIT.

So. without further do. With my upmost gratitude and admiration and obsessivity (yes. it IS a word) i now implore you or rather beg of you or maybe even YELL at you (umm... maybe that's going too far? mehh..) to please update quickly :)

hope to see *metaphorically of course :P* you soon! Can't wait to read more

1000/10

Author's Response: another lovely review! (with another lovely onomatopoeia--which is a super fun word!) next chapter should be up soon, but besides that i'm fresh out :/
thanks so much for your happy happy slightly crazy thoughts!
xoxo
Jilly

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I'm not forgetting to review!

I liked how you made them take Sam and Nick and Freddy from History of Magic. And your filler chapters are just epicly hilarious. I was laughing so much! So, I'll review next chapter and all those other ones after that. (Most likely. Bwahahahaha!!)
See ya!

Author's Response: haha much thanks, glad they're not boring and completely pointless...
xoxo
Jilly

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Hey! I'm back! I read the story again and I looked at your reply to that other review and.it's official. Ella Levine is my identical twin. I am just exactly how you described her. And I'm a tomboy and hang out with boys too. I've been hanging out with boys since birth, I have a real twin brother. Anyways.I do track too. It's fun, ain't it? My schedule is mad though.
I am so weird.
Anywho,
Again, I love your story. I'm bored so I'm just rambling on and on and on.

Bye bye!!! Love this story!
-nobody
P.s. this is the first story I have ever reviewed on!

Author's Response: ahh well i'm honored to have produced your identical twin to accompany your actual twin and to have stolen your first review! track is fun but i only do it to get better at cross country... oops.
xoxo
Jilly

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He stole her pancakes! I don't know why that upset me so much, but I was really excited about the idea of chocolate chip pancakes, and to just have them stolen from you like that... nooo!
Anyways, great chapter. I want more! I want to find out if anything happens between them! I suspect it will, and Finn will get all jealous or something. But Chase sounds cool (for now).
Update soon please :)

Author's Response: ahh the traumatic loss of breakfast pastries...(are pancakes considered breakfast pastries!?!)
anyway the next chapter is in the queue already (look at me, Miss Efficiency) and there will be some Chase/Ella/Team drama!!! get excited!
thanks for the review!
xoxo
Jilly
(feeling embarrassed for being up this late... curse you, insomnia and honors bio lab report!)

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oh my god, you are the best! How quick was that last update? so fast! do it again!

Author's Response: i just submitted the next chapter but its the last for a little bit ): it's all explained in the a/n for it. prepare for (sexualll) DRAMA!
thanks for the review!
xoxo
Jilly

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Wow! Two new chapters! Boom!

So yeah, sorry I haven't reviewed for a while. I've been really busy with The Golden Age of the Marauders (Chapter 4 has been rejected twice so I decided to completely re-wrote it, check back Saturday and it'll hopefully be up) but I'M HERE NOW!

HE STOLE ELLA'S BREAKFAST! DAVIES STOLE HER BREAKFAST!
My thoughts on Davies: I don't really like him, TBH. He just seems a bit of a prick and I much prefer Finn.
I love Finn!!!
I don't think Ella and Chase are going to end up together because they're such different people, and Chase seems like a bit of a player. Also, Ella's a massive tomboy, so if she was going to have a boyfriend, I think it would most likely be Finn or someone from the Gryffie team.

I wasn't surprised Ella was made a tutor: I loved it when she Transfigured that kid into a teapot right back in the first chapter. Who loves foreshadowing? WE DO!
I would suggest that you possibly go back and edit the scene with Minne, though; make it a bit more teacher-y on her part, and Ella not say things like 'sure' to her- I just think she'd be a little too intimidated to say things like that.

Overall, I loved the two new chapters. On with Chapter 8!

Miss Moneypenny :-)

P.S Also, just a thought, it might be better to say "teasing" instead of taunting. Or maybe it's my grammar freak coming out in me...
(Sorry. It does that a lot.) Penny :-)

Author's Response: Hooray for another lovely review!
I can't tell you my thoughts of ella finn chase and the rest because i can't spoil the story (:
sadly, i only have 1 more chapter to post before taking a brief hiatus due to finals and important track meets- ): so i'm rapid-firing some chapters to tide y'all over.
i honestly can't think of anything else to say-- response-block!
keep on reading!
xoxo
Jilly

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WaAaAaAaAaAa! (i always leave the weirdest onomatopeias in my comments =S)

Such an AMAZING chapter!!! ANd it was up really quickly too!! Bravo! Keep up the amazing work!!

Ohhh how i loved this chapter! I was wondering who the romance was going to be between. i was worried it might be with someone from the team. I like that they are just friends and that you brought an external character in for it.

Oh, and Chase. Hello Chase. My dear Chase. How i wish i could meet you. hehe... yeah... i'm nuts :P He seems like a nice guy, although we haven't seen much of him yet. The fork thing. to DIE for! How flirty is THAT!!

Oh, jillybeens, once more you've made me so happy! Thank you! I love your story so much. I have a lot of stories in my favorites list but yours is definately one of them that i look forward to reading the most!

Can't wait to read the next chapter! Don't keep me waiting long! I'll write soon!

Lots of admiration and fangirling,
slightlyobsessedwithfanfiction

Author's Response: Oh my goodness i love your reviews!
(sadly) i have 1 more full chapter to post then i have to take a break (finals and important track meets coming up= no time to procrastinate!)
i can't really think of anything else to say... but yeah love you and your reviews! keep reading!!!
xoxo Jilly

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I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY. PERIOD. Ella is so much like me. You know what, im just going to say I'm her identical twin. Except for if she has black hair. Can you describe what Ella looks like, I don't think you ever did. Pancakes rule!! Bye for now!!

Author's Response: I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT TOO. Ella's my inner diva. She hasn't been outright described (ex: I have brown hair and hazel eyes) bc no one goes around mentally saying that. But she's mentioned her features throughout the fic. if you didn't catch them... she's got caramel brown hair, hazel eyes, and is tall and athletic.

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I enjoyed it. Like you said, it was a bit of a filler chapter, but still fun to read!
Still loving the whole "one of the boys" relationship she has with the team... sticking true to the title!

Author's Response: thanks for the awesome feedback!

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one: totaly awesome! Ilove it so much!
two: Where is the romance promised in the summary?

Author's Response: thanks for the feedback!
IT IS COMING. not so much romance as sexual tension but still... it's coming! chapter 8 has quite a bit and it progresses as the story goes on.

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EeEeEeEeEeEeEeEeEeEe! (yes, i know, weird onomatopeia :P)

I'm just so happy another chapter is up! Loved it! ... but it was too short :(. And now i'm sad because i'll have to wait some more... Meh i'll just read the chapters again,... and again... and again.. until the new one is up. Ok, you must think i'm crazy! Which i kind of am... :P

I loved the conversation between Finn and Ella. I love that they've become such good friends. And the marshmellow fight... EPIC!

I just love reading your story. It's so engaging i never want to stop... but as it is 11 o'clock at night and i still have an essay to write for tomorrow (:S oops!) i should probably get back to work.

This was indeed a happy reading so thank you!
Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Eternally your biggest fan,

slightlyobsessedwithfanfiction

100/10

Author's Response: EeEeEeEeEeEe! another lovely review!
yeah, this chapter to WAY too long to validate (why staff why? i submitted march 31!!!) and it's a bit short but you know what? i like it. and the next chapter is longer-ish and finally digs into THE DRAMA! ah!
thank you so much for reviewing!!!
xoxo
Jilly

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Hello!

Can i just say... i LOVE this story!! Its so exilerating! I had so much energy reading this and i didn't want to stop. I really like the plot line and the characters. They are all amazing! I'd like to think that i recognize myself in Ella but maybe that's a bit of a fantasy. :P I love a challenge too!

I love Finn. He's hilarious! I love their relationship, it's fun, light and, perfect. Her relationship with the whole team is great. The "princess" nickname just adds that touch of familiarity and cozyness to the team atmosphere.

When do you think the next chapter will be up because well. you've made me obsessed. How dare you? hehe... no but seriously, your story is now officially on my list of stories to check every five minutes to see if they've been updated! Do you realise what you have done to me? I've neglected my homework and my dinner (and you should know i NEVER neglect my dinner :P)!

Yuu are a great writer, and i hope you'll update quickly. You have a great talent and imagination and i can't wait to read more of you.

Sincerely,
a new obsessed fan (like my pen name indicates)

slightlyobsessedwithfanction

Author's Response: Can I just say...
I LOVE YOU!!!
this is probably THE LOVELIEST REVIEW I'VE EVER GOTTEN-- thank you!!!
(now my rambling thoughts in response to your awesome thoughts...)
just in case you cared for a paragraph with some substance... this story basically is made up of characters that i wish i was more like/ knew in the real world and not just in my brain. Ella is pretty much my idealized version of myself and her thoughts are exactly what mine would be in the situation.
I'm so glad that you love this so much and are obsessed! i'm obsessed with writing this story (which has definitely resulted in homework neglection but not dinner bc food is vital to my existence). And get excited-- soon you're going to love this even more because things are going to get SO FREAKING DRAMATIC (in a goodish way) and awesome and i am so so so excited!!!
chapter whatever we're on now is taking a frustratingly long time to validate but IT'S IN THE QUEUE. SOMEWHERE.
THANK YOU SO MUCH for your wonderful thoughts and comments! it means the world and (once again) i'm so glad that you love the story! keep on reading and reviewing and thanks for reading this pointless ramble!
XOXO
JILLY


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