This reminds me a lot of a short filmthat my drama teacher dic for a festival. It was called teal, it was practically the same thing except thehudband does notnleave his wife vor another woman and their little girl is telling the story. At the end when the mom dies the girl is in a corner and says the saddest part is i was the daughter they never had. I loved your story, jt was very well written and you knew how to say things at the correct moment. Kudos!! Report Review
You really got to stop killing people off you're making me sad lol.
My god this story was amazing. It was a tear jerker from start to finish. The dialogue mixed with paragraphs was kind of confusing at first but I got past it. Your banner and story name are absolutely perfect.
Good job =] Report Review
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