That's a really heart-touching piece of work! I loved it! You've worked very well on the 'time' part. But I didn't get a reference to what James actually did (drank poison? Why??) But Remus's personality is well-described. There are a few spelling mistakes here and there throughtout the story but it's my habit to catch spelling mistakes *shrugs*

So finally, this was a good story to read.

Keep writing... :)

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Oh dear... It was beautiful! I love it :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you like it!

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Hi!
Love this story.Is there more to it though,because even though it does seem to have finished it's status isnt "Completed" so just wondering :)

Author's Response: It still has one more chapter :)

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This is pretty amazing! Please update soon!!! :))

Author's Response: Thanks! Will do!

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I can't wait to see Teddy's reaction! xD

Author's Response: Can't wait for you to read it!

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How many chapters will this fanfic have? :)

Author's Response: Probably about six or seven. Short and sweet :)


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Wow, that is really, really good! I can't wait for the next chapter! :D

Author's Response: Thanks! Next chapter is in the queue, so it should show up soon.

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This looks like it'll be good! Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! I have the whole thing written out, I just need to edit the chapters a bit as I go, so I will update pretty quickly.

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