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Reading Reviews for On the Way to Wonderful

3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by AriesGirl40

14th June 2013:

That was so believable. I can see Scorpius offering homework help in return for not letting her be alone at a time like that. Great chapter

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I've been trying to work on making my characters a little deeper and more believeable lately; I'm glad you liked it!

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Review #2, by AriesGirl40

Lost and Found

20th May 2013:

Adored this chapter. Boys being boys and girls being girls. Short tempered and short sighted. Thank goodness kids grow out of that stage. I take it their still in the "It's all about me and I want it now!" stage :)

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! Yes, they are definitely in that stage right now! Hopefully we will see a few moments of maturity from them in the coming chapters, but I'm afraid they are better at acting like children right now!

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Review #3, by resurrectionstone22

Sorted

9th February 2013:

You will have a whole herd of angry red-heads after you. And trust me, nobody wants that! XD... poor Scorpius! That story made my day! :D Keep up the great work!!! :)

Author's Response: Yay!! :DD Thanks for your reviews!

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