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Review #1, by Lululuna The Announcement

2nd February 2013:
Hi, I think this is a really great idea to write about. My advice would be to add more detail, both in descriptions and dialogue, so the reader gets to know the characters a bit better! :)

Author's Response: Thank you for your your kind comment! I always get ideas but I rarely write them down..
I'll be sure to tell you more about the characters and decribe everything a tad more as I go. I like to ease into you learning about the characters because I hate the fact you instantly know evrything about every character before ch 2- It makes plot twists predictable...


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