Reading Reviews for Rebuilding
8 Reviews Found

Review #1, by blackdiamond Chapter Three: Luna

4th July 2014:
You are a very good writer. The way you are introducing this story by different characters is interesting and more detailed . I wish you would continue and get them together at Hogwarts. However it seems you have quit on this story. That's a shame I would have liked to seen where you take this .Thank you

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Review #2, by Nm Chapter Three: Luna

15th February 2014:
Ah so exciting
When will the next chapter come?

9/10 bc a lot of unnecessary detail made it slow

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Review #3, by Lou Chapter Three: Luna

22nd August 2013:
Thanks for uploading, it's been too long! :) I liked this chapter but not as much as the other two for some reason. (not that helpfull, I know and I'm sorry. I'll read the other two again and see if I come up with anything more specific.) Untill then keep up the good work and thanks for the good quality fanfiction!

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Review #4, by Nm Chapter One: Dean

22nd July 2013:
I can't wait to see Dean and Luna meet up again and provide support for each other!
Dean and Luna are now, interestingly, a new favourite!

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Review #5, by Lou Chapter Two: Hermione

3rd July 2013:
So far i love it! In my oppinion you are one if the better ff writers in terms of the way you write :) it makes a nice change. More please!

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Review #6, by Bella Chapter One: Dean

4th May 2013:
OMG so cute
I never thought I would go on harrypotterfanfiction .com because I hated it
I never thought I would ever read a pairing that isn't Dramione

But OMG this is too good! I mean its only been one chapter but its so cute and well written and it totally captured me
Good amount of hope, angst, love, and adventure/excitement

And it promises a dramione as well! Ah!

Author's Response: Thank you! I've been extremely busy since I've posted this first chapter, but I am in the process of writing the second as I type this response out! I'm glad to hear your thoughts, and I hope the Dramione that will come on in later chapters will be satisfactory - I actually recently revised my plans for the structure of the story to center more around them!

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Review #7, by nm Chapter One: Dean

4th May 2013:
This was seriously Brilliant!

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Review #8, by sam Chapter One: Dean

3rd February 2013:
Wow what a great start! The story looks like it will unfold quite nicely. I can't wait to see luna and dean interact! You write so well!

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