Reading Reviews for The British Are Coming
  
3 Reviews Found
Review #1, by shewhomustnotbenamed_ Uncommon Name
18th May 2013:
I really liked it! please update soon :)

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Review #2, by Holly_Mist Mommy Problems
24th February 2013:
hello :)
i think your idea of the story is great. However i think you need to develop your characters more. Especially Addie since she's the protagonist. Her characterization is sort of...vague? (i'm not sure if that's the right word). For me - it would be to justify as to why Addie is a little rude. Because, sometimes i like Addie and sometimes i don't. So i think if you work a little more on that - you should be okay! :)
Update soon :) x

Author's Response: Thank you so much for that pointer, I'll defiantly use it. Thank you!

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Review #3, by Naomu Not Your Girl
31st January 2013:
Love it so haularious plus wicked cool

Author's Response: Oh my merlin! THANK YOU!
-Claire

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