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Review #1, by dreamer21 Supremacy

25th April 2013:
its perfect, though i want to know more of it. great story, felt like i was in some music video. and it reminded me of this song, "until we bleed" BY kleerup. listen to it, you will surely get what im saying.
im no good with lengthy reviews but this was amazing,also i love the banner.thankyou for the swap. totally worth it.

Author's Response: Hey Em!!

Oh, I'm so glad that you enjoyed it that much!! I didn't know that it was that uh, enjoyable?! Thank you!!! I can't stop smiling right now!!

WOW. I just listened to it. It really fits doesn't it?!

Oh, really don't worry bout your length. Trust me when I say that this review made my day :D Thank you so much ♥

I'm glad you loved it!! And the banner too!! It's beautiful isn't it? No, thank YOU for the swap!! Oh, and I'm reviewing your stories now :)

Thank you for such a lovely review!!
- Abhi

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Review #2, by FredWeasleyIsMyKing Supremacy

3rd February 2013:
Hello, Laurenzo7321 here from the forums :)

Oooh, I really enjoyed this one shot. It was a different take on both the joker Fred, who takes after his dad and uncle, that we usually see and the song you got. I really enjoyed it!

The imagery was great in this and I enjoyed reading it through Fred's POV. Alex really got under his skin and the way you showed that and built it up in the club was really good!

I like that by leaving him she brought him down a peg or two, gave him a taste of his own medicine so to speak. It made him realise what he lost and ultimately made him fall in love with her. The last line was perfect!

Great job and I will PM you soon with the results!

Lauren :)

Author's Response: Hey Lauren!

Thank you!! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!! I enjoyed writing it :) It is a different side to him, I really couldn't of another way to express him ;P

Thank you so much. I was really worried that I hadn't wrote enough to make it descriptive, so for you to say that the imagery was great really makes my day :)

Exactly!! Spot on :) You never know how much you love something until it's gone, so to speak.

Thank you again for such a great challenge, I really really loved doing it :) Looking forward to finding out!!

Thanks for such a amazing review and challenge!!

- Abhi

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