I love this. All these stories with letters and all. But
every time it's always got a sad ending. So I'm just
going to add a sentence. That's all right, ok?
Little did Emily know that in the afterlife, Harry
Potter was sitting down at his desk. He began to
Actually that just makes it like really sad/happy at
the same time. Report Review
I spoke to soon. I came to your page and saw that you had written 2 stories.
This story is so sad! I think I found 1 typo and everything else was perfect. The dialogue wasn't choppy (something I need to work on myself) and the conversation between Rose and Emily was really nice.
The letter takes the cake. The fact that she's writing a letter to her dead father is heartwrenching, especially the part about how she made him a father's day card and Ginny stayed up all night crying.
This was an astounding story and I do hope you continue writing. 10/10 and very good job =] Report Review
I loved this so much, the raw emotion almost made my heart break and I teared up quite a lot.
I love this :') 10/10Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review!!! I'm glad you liked it. It's my 1st piece and i'd hoped for reviews such as yours =] Thank you again Report Review
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