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Review #1, by Flipp Dear Daddy

8th May 2013:
I love this. All these stories with letters and all. But
every time it's always got a sad ending. So I'm just
going to add a sentence. That's all right, ok?
Little did Emily know that in the afterlife, Harry
Potter was sitting down at his desk. He began to
Dear Emily,
Actually that just makes it like really sad/happy at
the same time.

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Review #2, by blackthoughtsredwriting Dear Daddy

6th February 2013:
I spoke to soon. I came to your page and saw that you had written 2 stories.

This story is so sad! I think I found 1 typo and everything else was perfect. The dialogue wasn't choppy (something I need to work on myself) and the conversation between Rose and Emily was really nice.

The letter takes the cake. The fact that she's writing a letter to her dead father is heartwrenching, especially the part about how she made him a father's day card and Ginny stayed up all night crying.

This was an astounding story and I do hope you continue writing. 10/10 and very good job =]

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Review #3, by peace2lovepotter Dear Daddy

1st February 2013:
I loved this so much, the raw emotion almost made my heart break and I teared up quite a lot.
I love this :') 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review!!! I'm glad you liked it. It's my 1st piece and i'd hoped for reviews such as yours =] Thank you again

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