It seems like a good story but you have some grammatical errors so you should probably look over it or ask someone to proof read it for you. Also, its Quidditch not quittage, so you better fix that :) Other than that, it was good. Looking forward to the next chapter! :)Author's Response: Thanks a lot for reviewing, and I really appreciate the constructive criticism. I'll be sure to fix the grammatical mistakes as soon as I can (: Thanks for reading as well! Report Review
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