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Review #1, by dreamer21 Savior

26th April 2013:
I am in love again. I want such a fluffy romantic boyfriend too. Real like sucks. Really bad. :(
Stupid romance, anyway I shall stop cribbing and start rambling. I am here to make you smile out loud. SO SMILEEE :D
I laughed at footsie and Bill incident. HAHAHA. Omg, soo awkward. hahaha.
And also at, "no Couch. YES" hahaha so typical. It seemed so original. The girlies were cute too, so was Harry running for Lilly. Such a happy scene? Why aren't families this happy in real? I loved it, It suited Christmas perfectly. So keep that smile on and keep writing.

Author's Response: Oh, don't we all want a fluffy romantic, sweet and thoughtful boyfriend. Too bad only some of us get one :( But hopefully, for both of us, we get one soon.

I am smiling already!!! Just knowing that I've gotten a review from you has made me smile :)
Yeah, it must've been awkward. I wanted to make them feel young, even though they have 2 daughters. I'm glad that you found it original!! I didn't want it to be filled with cliches.

I know right?! I squealed when I came up with it. That's how I imagine my family to be like in the future. I totally understand. Families are dysfunctional, and very sad sometimes, but they do have happy moments too!!

I'm glad you loved it!!! Thank you again for your very sweet reviews!!!
- Abhi

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Review #2, by Potterwatch124 Savior

2nd March 2013:
That is officially the most adorable thing I have ever read! Completely different from what I thought Percy and Audrey would be like, but it still works :)

Author's Response: THANK YOU SOOO MUCH!! AHHH!! You have no idea how much I'm smiling right now :D Thank you!!! I'm so glad that you enjoyed it!!

I did want to portray them differently, and I'm glad that you think it works!!

Thank you so much for such a lovely review!! You've made my day!!
- Abhi

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Review #3, by Avanell 2 Savior

2nd February 2013:
Sweet story...I so adore this couple :D

Author's Response: Hi there!!

Thank you!!! I adore this couple too ;)
Thanks for reviewing!!

- Abhi

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Review #4, by CloakAuror9 Savior

28th January 2013:
I saw your status update about this in the forums and I noticed the word 'fluff'. Of course, I had to go check it out. :P

I'm not very familiar with Percy/Audrey but this is one of the best I have seen so far! I love reading about Percy pictured in a more happier and lighter state. My cheeks kinda hurt from grinning so much through out the story. Their chemistry is so fantastic! It's full of love and happiness.

Somewhere in the back of my mind, I've always imagined Percy and Audrey as very uptight parents but I didn't see any of that at all here -that or I might have missed it. Molly is so lucky! Ice cream and waffle for breakfast, sheesh. I wish I got to do that during Christmas mornings.

Also, I love the humour Percy displayed in this one-shot.

"I don't like the couch. It doesn't have the same Audrey feel as she does. And I like the Audrey feel."

"Thank god for that. No couch. Yes."

Those two lines had me laughing so much. I don't know why. There's just something really funny about Percy being exiled to the couch.

Anyway, this was an amazing story! Like I said, one of the best I've read. ♥ It totally made the rest of my day. Thank you for writing this! :)


58th review out of 100

Author's Response: Hi Izzy!!

This review has made my day. I just wanted you to know that.

Anyway, fluff. Doesn't everyone love it?! How can someone not? And awww!! Thank you so much!! You've made me blush :P My cheeks were hurting too while I was writing it. Fluff's just one of those feel good genre's just made for rainy days in front of the fire :)

Yeah, you're right. There isn't any uptightness here. I'm actually writing a Percy/Audrey fic, so this Percy is based on that Percy who is learning to not be controlling, and uptight. In that story, Audrey is a light, upbeat character who lightens Percy and shows him how to live, so this is how I imagined him to end up like. Happy, carefree and absolutely loving life :)

Ughh, you've got my mouth watering AGAIN. Gosh, what is it about waffles?! Irresistible. Completely irresistible.

Hehe, I'm glad you enjoyed it!! And yes, he absolutely FEARS the couch ;)

You are too nice. Seriously. And I absolutely love you for that. And this is BY FAR the BEST review I've ever received ♥

Thank you for the absolutely AMAZING review!!
- A blushing and overjoyed Abhi

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