JESSYYY! This is fab! I'm so excited to see how this pans out :D Will you be continuing it? :)
I love Emily she seems really cool alreadyyy.
I also laughed a lot during this chapter which is fab!
*gives cookies for inspiration to write more*
♥ Caitlin (I don't know if you remember me since it's been a while, I'm Caaitiee in some places eheh)Author's Response: No. I'm sorry, I don't remember you at all. ;D I'm totally joking! HI CAITIE! I MISSED YOU!! Also, next chapter is done, I'm just waiting for my computer to come back from repairs. So it should be posted by the end of the week! :D THANK YOU SO MUCH! Report Review
Haha, loved it, you had me laughing out loud several times there.
Your characterisation is good, I can relate to Emily. Actually, Emily is my name, so I already love her!
Please update soon!
PS-Did you know 'Ringo' is Japanese for 'apple'? True story!Author's Response: Awe! You're so sweet! I'm so glad you like Emily, she's my favourite character to write by far!
The next chapter is finished, I just have to wait until the end of the week while my computer is in repairs! :
Omigosh! I forgot that Ringo meant apple! That's awesome! :DD Report Review
I liked this chapter! Keep writing this story, please!
InesAuthor's Response: Hi! Thanks so much for your review! Next chapter is written and I'll post it tonight. :') Report Review
I liked it, it was funny and a fast read. Hope the plot starts soon!Author's Response: Thank you so much darling! Next chapter is coming in the next few days. :') Report Review
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