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Review #1, by YourLoyalFan five

14th May 2015:
Please update! I've been checking the queue everyday for the next chapter

Author's Response: aha! I'm getting back into writing this, so look for an update in the near future!
Thank you for your review!

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Review #2, by Spyci five

12th November 2014:
I'm love love loving this fic so far! It's so original and so cool and I just... I can't.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! It means a lot to me that you enjoy my work :)

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Review #3, by potterfan310 five

4th September 2014:

I LOVE your Narcissa and I am so glad she's back. Your characterisation of her is by far the best, especially since she's strict but I honestly think she's got a soft side to her as well.

The whole idea for this story, I adore it. Especially it being set in a hotel managed by Narcissa of all people! The band sounds pretty awesome, lucky Mike and Jo for working when they came in.

The descriptions of Jo's dress, man is sounds stunning!! Wish I was Jo right then!

Patrick is so cute, bless him, he and Jo go well together! Plus their banter is just brilliant! But there's a teeny problem named Louis Weasley, who I definitely think will work his way even more back into Jo's life. Ahh Patrick is so fab, I love him. I do hope he and Jo do date properly at some point.

As always another great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!


Author's Response: I'm sure Narcissa totally needed a job after the events of DH. And bossing people around is so fitting!
I was trying to be so funny with the band and I'm not sure how well it came off- i was super happy with the name of the band though!!
Thank you so much for your review!

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Review #4, by Irishseeker five

30th August 2014:
Loved it! I'm loving Patrick so much, he's such a great character but so are all of the staff, love them. Brilliant writing and I am certainly looking forward to more Louis/Jo. Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Author's Response: Patrick is a babe, right? And my favourite character has to be Toby- I can't wait to go into more detail about his hatred for the deputy manager!
Thank you very much for your review!

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Review #5, by kassandra466 five

23rd August 2014:
That was another superb chapter, the duchess reminds me of the restaurant at the Fairmont Olympus in Seattle, Beautiful hotel, wonderful city and even lovelier dining. You did yet another fabulous job, I am so interested in this story, maybe its because it hits close to home being set in a hotel and all. Anyway I love Patrick, Jo and Micheal, they are all such fabulous characters

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm very pleased you like it- both the hotel/restaurant setting and my characters! I know my strong suit isn't description, so I'm trying to push my boundaries with this story!

Thank you very much for continuing to read and review :)

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Review #6, by kassandra466 four

14th August 2014:
Ah. I need to know how her date with Patrick goes.. I cant wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: Next chapter is up! I hope you enjoy it, and thank you for reviewing!

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Review #7, by kassandra466 three

14th August 2014:
Woah, drama, my favorite. It was flawless. The best fan fiction I've read in a while.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I've very pleased that you like it :)

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Review #8, by kassandra466 two

14th August 2014:
That was rather intense. I loved it, I can not wait for more.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm very happy you enjoyed it!

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Review #9, by kassandra466 one

14th August 2014:
I loved it. As someone who has grown up in Fairmont hotels you have the atmosphere and the gossipy staff down to a tee.

Author's Response: Thank you! I was aiming for exactly the same kind of atmosphere, and I wanted to focus on the staff way more than the actual guests.
Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #10, by Crescent Moon  four

22nd July 2014:
Loved this chapter. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next with Sam as I'm guessing that's not going to be the last we see of him. And the rest of the chapter was brilliant too. Can't wait to read the next one :)

Author's Response: It definitely will NOT be the last we see of Sam! I love Sam already, and the next chapter is now up! Hope you enjoy it, and thank you for reviewing!

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Review #11, by potterfan310 four

18th July 2014:

I love this, so I was really glad to see it got updated :D

I still can't get over that Louis was going to propose! Or that he blurted it out to Jo whilst she was working. Drunk Louis is kind of brilliant.

Poor Jo having to take a drunken Mrs Barnwell to bed, but at least it wasn't a drunk Louis :p Their little chat was sweet, I think in more ways than one that Jo will warm to Mrs Barnwell as they a little similar in ways.

I love your descriptions of the hotel and the hotel itself because it's such a different concept to normal fics but I LOVE it!

Squee, I'm excited for Jo's date!

Can't wait for the next chapter :D


Author's Response: (updated finally!) Drunk Louis is an idiot, and he is very mean and silly.

Jo and Mrs Barnwell are quite similar, and I put her in so the memory of leaving Louis was fresh in her mind.

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

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Review #12, by raiser four

11th July 2014:
I love this story. Very refreshing and edgy. Update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Next chapter is now up!

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Review #13, by greenbirds three

26th December 2013:
omg wow- just read this and i'm really enjoying it, i like the spin on the louis/oc story; most of them centre in hogwarts but this one doesn't and it's easily one of my new favourites! i'm sorry i'm quite tired and i can't really form a proper review- but please update soon!

Author's Response: It's okay! Thank you very much for the review! :) I really enjoy trying to stretch the boundary of fanfiction, and so putting Jo's characters outside of their normal settings is fun!
Thanks for reading, I'll update soon!

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Review #14, by heart4siriusblack three

29th August 2013:
Love this so far! Very original and well written. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: thank you so much! I'm very happy you're enjoying it! Thanks for the review!

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Review #15, by potterfan310 three

27th August 2013:
Me again :)

Oh Louis, trying to speak to Jo when she is clearly wanting to leave already for her break.

Compared to Louis, Patrick really does sound hot ;)

Talk about awkward, having your ex listen to your conversation with your soon to be date.

It's cute Jo's got a badger on her shoulder, I'm guessing she was a Hufflepuff at Hogwarts then?

Oh my god!! Bombshell alert. Louis was going to propose to her, squee! Oh Louis, if you were going to propose why sleep with someone else :/

I can't wait for the next chapter since I'm loving this story and all your characters especially Jo and Narcissa (I love her characterisation by the way!)

Soph :D

Author's Response: Hello!

Poor Jo :P Louis just doesn't know when to quit, does he? He just won't leave them alone!
And yeah, I also said in the first chapter that Jo was a Hufflepuff at Hogwarts, but I mainly put the tattoo in so I could have Narcissa being disapproving :P

I KNOW BOMBSHELL! It's such a shock I didn't even plan it, it just kind of slipped out my fingers :P

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, Soph! It means a lot.

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Review #16, by potterfan310 two

26th August 2013:
I'm really intrigued about what happened between Jo and Louis, but it must be awful if he cheated on her.

Do I detect a crush?? Me thinks Patrick may have one on Jo, he seems like a really sweet guy. From your description he reminds me a little of Ben Barnes or even a young Sirius.

A magical hotel, of course there's bound to have something crazy happen.

"Jo was trying to discreetly stab guests with the heels of her shoes." - I really love this line, it just adds even more crazy to the hotel and to Jo's personality!

I really, really LOVE your take on Narcissa, she is pure brilliance! And I have a feeling she is not going to be all too happy about the chimera spitting fire all over her polished floors :P

Whoo for Charlie, you never see enough of him in fics and I always feel he gets left out. So glad he's here thought!

I love how Ron is just blunt to about things to Louis. I wonder why he came down if he knew nothing about the magical creature. Maybe hoping to catch a glimpse of Jo?

This is such a unique story and I LOVE IT even though I'm two chapters in! :)

Off onto chapter three.

Soph :D

Author's Response: Personally, I absolutely hate Louis, but as a person he's really not too bad. I'm sure many people have strayed when their partner wasn't around a lot, and while that doesn't excuse cheating, its something that happens quite a lot and hopefully lets you understand Louis a bit more. He's just a normal guy who made a mistake.

I'm glad you like that line, it's one of those lines I am very proud of. Bless Jo- and that poor hotel has probably seen a lot of crazy!(Shameless self promotion: if you like Charlie I have a fic centered on him called Acting the Part) And Ron came down because he liked to help and I wanted the Golden Trio all in one place :P Plus he is an Auror and I wanted his bluntness. :P

I am so very glad you like it, thank you very much for the reading and reviewing!

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Review #17, by potterfan310 one

26th August 2013:
I was really intrigued by the summary and title so here I am. I've never read anything that was set in a hotel as normally it's at Hogwarts, and I think it's a really original idea!!

Hotel Artemis kind of reminds me of 666 Park Avenue which was a TV show set in a hotel where creepy stuff went on.

Ooo I really like that Narcissa is the manager of the hotel, nice to see her doing something interesting, rather than sitting around Malfoy Manor dealing with the fact her husband is in Azkaban or as I've occasionally read, dead.

Both Michael and Jo seem like really interesting characters and I like Jo's back story about living in the Leaky Cauldron. Jo and Louis, well I certainly think things are going to get interesting what with their history.

I really like this so far and I'm definitely adding this to my favourites!!!

Off to chapter two!

Soph :D

Author's Response: Hey! I'm glad you were intrigued and that my hooks brought you in :P
I've never seen 666 Park Avenue- I wanted to write a hotel fic after finishing Hotel Babylon (a BBC show).
And yeah, Narcissa is a really cool character in my story, hopefully I'll get a chance to explore her back story a little more soon!
Jo's backstory was what made her want to join the hotel in the first place, so I'm glad you liked that, and Michael is adorable, isn't he?

I'm so very happy you liked it, thank you very much for reading and reviewing!

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Review #18, by Grace three

26th August 2013:
I got super excited when I saw a new chapter and it was great :D
Thanks so much for updating !

Author's Response: Yay! Thanks for the review, I'm very happy you're liking it :)

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Review #19, by Stephanie three

25th August 2013:
I love the way you set it all up! I'm in suspense!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! :D Thanks for the review!

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Review #20, by AccioTeddyLupin three

25th August 2013:
Well its only been like 2 months but good chapter, good chapter.


love, the girl who waited for another chapter.

Author's Response: ah, don't make me feel worse than I already do! :( It was probably a lot longer than two months and I really really appreciate fabulous readers like you sticking with me and the story!

Thank you so much for continuing to read and review (and waiting so long!), you are a wonderful human being and I promise that there will be a new chapter up of Artemis before a month!

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Review #21, by ButtercupBoss three

25th August 2013:
I love it! The scene between Louis, Patrick, and Jo is just priceless XD I'm loving the character dynamic, and the background story is intriguing too ;) can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! The scene between Louis and Patrick and Jo was SO MUCH FUN to write, I'm very happy you enjoyed it.

Thanks for the review!

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Review #22, by AlexFan two

23rd July 2013:
And of course there's a Chimaera in the hotel. Why wouldn't there be one! Stuff happens in normal hotels but in a magical hotel weird stuff happens. I wonder why Louis is paying so much attention to Jo. Is he expecting her to take him back or something because if so he's in for quite a surprise. He shouldn't expect Jo to treat him with anything besides professionalism.

And it just goes to show that even most strict manager is nice, especially when faced with a Chimaera. Narcissa is very strict but for some reason I really like her as a character.

Author's Response: Hello again! I was actually a bit stuck of what to do.. so I was like *pulls out Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them* what could ruin stuff?

That is exactly what Louis wants, the dirty beggar. I'll explain more in later chapters, but the slimy rat wants to worm his way in! How dare he. And I was a bit eh about my decision to make Narcissa the manager, but I warmed to her in this chapter and I'm so happy you did as well!

Thank you very much for such a lovely review!

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Review #23, by AlexFan one

23rd July 2013:
I've finally gotten around to reading this and km so glad because this is brilliant. I feel like rubbing my hands together and cackling because I feel like major things are going to start happening.

I've never read any fanfiction where everything took place in a hotel so this is new for me. This is really interesting though, even though the chapter is not action-packed you've still kept it interesting.

I already feel like I'm part of the hotel employee's. Anyway, awesome first chapter! I'm on to the next one!

Author's Response: Thank you! You should definitely start cackling, I've got some great stuff planned! :D
I really fancied doing something in a hotel after watching the whole of Hotel Babylon (a BBC show) and its a bit different and I live for unique.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

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Review #24, by do-not-forget-my-url-24601 two

17th July 2013:

Author's Response: I'm so happy you liked this story as well! Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!

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Review #25, by FlameSky two

29th June 2013:
This is so different compared to most stories on here, it's brilliant! Well thought out and very descriptive, I look forward to the rest of it!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! It really means a lot to me that you think that :)
Thanks for the review!

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