Uh oh, I've fallen for another one of your stories!! You really are an incredible writer, always keeping us on our toes! I like the idea of this story and is it bad that I kinda hope there'll be a love triangle? Looking forward to more!
Annabel
10/10

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I'm am so very interested in this story. The thought of starting a relationship (or at least a friendship) with Al the night she saw him die gives me all those delightfully angsty feels. I really liked how she reacted in the kitchen scene. It seems like girls in fanfiction react so smoothly to awkward situations so it was refreshing for her to blush and stutter. Sweet Albus and angst are my kryptonite.

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No please add another chapter soon and please make sure Al doesn't die and please make sure that they end up together (okay I ask for a lot)

Also you can get a banner at TheDarkArts (.net type it into google)
so I would check it out if I was you

~Macy

Author's Response: Haha, I don't think I can live up to those demands in chapter three... 'cause then I wouldn't have a story. ;)
Thanks for the info. I will when I find the time.

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I really like the first two chapter. A rather intriguing start :).

Author's Response: Thank you!

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This is a really good start, I really like it.
I can't wait to see where you go with it.

Author's Response: I don't want to keep you waiting, 'cause I KNOW where I'm going with this, I just need to find the time to write it all! :( anyway, thank you! :)

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This is really interesting! I love how you have Louis as the BFF. Its really unique!! Now I can't wait to see an update =)

Hope it comes soon!

Author's Response: Yes! Don't ever stop loving Louis as the best friend. He's the best! ;) Thanks for the review.

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YOU'D BETTER UPDATE SOON! I MEAN IT! :)) This is sooo cool! I love it, it's absolutely heart-breaking it truly is :'(. I really need to read more so please update soon! :D xx
1000/1000

Author's Response: I'm thinking about uploading the second chapter right now! ;) right after answering these reviews. Thanks!

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I really like this, by putting the "vision/dream" in the beginning it has become so intriguing and I really hope you continue to work on it.

Author's Response: I wish I could work on it all the time! ;) I'm already completely in love with this story so yeah, I reallyl wish I had more time. Thank you for reviewing and I hope you'll like what's coming. :)

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