Hey I just came across this story and I thought it was wonderful.

I've never really thought about how Andromeda and Ted got together, but I think you portrayed it very relaistically, and you couldn't but fall in love with this couple.

You captured the nerves of Ted very well, and it must have been scary for a muggleborn asking out a pureblood in a time like that.

I thought it was great that you included how much of a risk Andromeda took, in meeting up with Ted. As in the story you tend to forget that she's a Black, and therefore someone like him would be a no go, so it was done really well.

I thought this had the perfect fluff as well, and considering that you've never written fluff before, I thought it was very well done! I found this was really enjoyable, so thanks for the great read:D

Author's Response: Hello!

Thank you so much. Just like you, I never thought about how they started as a couple as pieces I've read are usually later on but they idea hit me one day and I thought I should write it.

I'm so thankful that you enjoyed this so much, it was really lovely to hear and it helps get rid of my nerves on this piece a little bit more. Thank you for the absolutely lovely review!

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Hey there, here to review your piece for my challenge! :)
Aww, how cute! I love the story of how he asked her out and then when they were sat in the little clearing, it was adorable! I haven't read much to do with Ted/Andromada but this was such a nice read and I love the idea of him worrying that he isn't good enough for her; I just want to give him a hug!

Your prompt was fluff and you've did a great job with that, this is such a cute read and I can just block out everything canon and pretned that they lived happily ever after!

This is a lovely story and you've did a great job with the prompt! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad that you enjoyed my story- I really wasn't sure whether it was fluff enough, but I asked some friends and they said it was. Anyway, I'm so glad that I was able to take part in your challenge because it was actually a lot of fun writing this, so thank you for creating your challenge.

Also, thank you for your lovely review.

x Ely

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I liked this story! I felt like it was a little short, but it was good nonetheless. Ted/Andromeda never get that much attention, which is pretty sad. Plus, we really don't know at lot about them before, so you can basically make up your own story. This was a really nice example of how it might have happened. I really like your writing (I should check out your others stories!) :)

Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I was worried it was a bit short too but I didn't want to try and make it longer for fear of repeating myself. I agree with you completely, I love Ted/Andromeda so much so it always make me happy when I find a fic about them- figured it was about time I gave it a go myself. I'm glad you like my writing, that has honestly made my day. Thanks for the review!

x Ely

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