Hey it's soapman333 from the review swap. I chose this one because I've read and enjoyed Pride and Prejuice.
This is a very delightful story! My favorite line: "Look, don't take this personally, Anise - but one day very soon I'm going to murder you." It took me off guard and I choked on my coffee.
I like the overall narration of this story. It's sophisticated and yet thoroughly humorous. My other favorite section is when your MC watched James' and Lily's exchange at breakfast and made reference to a hamster running around in its wheel.
Hilarious! I'll check out the next chapter, for sure,
soapman333Author's Response: Pride and Prejudice is brilliant. :)
I'm not great at writing humor (hmm, does that mean I'm a boring person?), so I guess I'm glad my attempts worked out.
Thanks for the swap! Report Review
Wow, great bit of writing, I really enjoyed it! Your characters are really interesting as well...thanks for putting it up! Keep up the good work, I love a good Marauder story :)
*yay first review*
...must read more.Author's Response: Thank you! :) Starting chapter two today. Report Review
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