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Review #1, by Guest 15 Going On 16

9th August 2015:
It's never a good thing to have the Wotter Clan on your trail. I have a feeling they're gonna have to be a lot more careful now. I feel like James will be most insistent on finding out what they're up to. And being head boy he can probably arrange the schedule so he'll patrol with her and have a good time to interrogate her. Other than that I love Charlotte. She seems super smart, talented and generally underestimated. Those are always the best characters. I feel bad that her family doesn't see her for who she is though, and couldn't accept her being a Ravenclaw. And I think that Charlottes weak spot for James might cause a problem. But then again if he's following her around he might finally realize how wonderful she is and they'll fall madly in love. Anyway, I hope you get the chance to update soon because I really love your story. It's something different but still really good quality

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Review #2, by xxDobbyX The Beginning

1st July 2015:
Hey,
I love the build up of your story but are you still writing it? Hope you are :-D

Author's Response: I am still writing, just with a slight delay.

Thanks for your kind words!!

xx - s


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Review #3, by Guest The Beginning

12th June 2015:
You have a really great story started here! Are you gonna continue it soon? Charlotte is great. I feel so bad that she doesn't get the recognition she deserves when she's so easy to like. And hm James is looking at Charlotte? Interesting. Anyway I can't wait to see what you'll do with this story! It's kinda disappointing but at the same time great that there are no similar stories found. I would love to read something as good as this but I've the uniqueness.You've got a great beginning and you've somehow managed to get readers hooked on the first chapter. Good luck, and happy writing!

Author's Response: Wow, thanks for this!! It makes me feel a lot better when writing this that people actually want to read it. I have a couple chapters written but the problem is I dont have a beta so I have to wait a while before going back to correct mistake without wanting to break every 6 seconds.

But about Charlotte...well she is a very interesting character, I hope. And yes...is James looking at her?

Hope ya keep reading!!

xx - s


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Review #4, by XOdannieXO The Beginning

4th May 2015:
Interesting. Interesting, indeed ;D - I really enjoyed it; and I can't remember the last time, I read a work of art that had a Longbottom as its protagonist... I think I never did, before.

Keep it going, I would enjoy to see how everything will turn out for Charlotte and her obvious crush on James.. ;)

Author's Response: Aww thank you so much!! And yes, there is an obvious lack of Longbottom in the world Everyone needs to join the band wagon.

Thanks for reviewing!!

xx - s


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