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Review #1, by Guest Letters Home

10th June 2014:
That's absolutely hilarious

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Review #2, by Freda_and_Georgina Letters Home

16th July 2013:
really neat story! I liked how you portrayed Albus' character. One loose end stuck out to me: Albus is kind of vague as to whether or not he got in any real trouble or not, and I'd think he'd find out before he left the office. And I caught the Scorpius hint too. (Though he was pointed out at the station, maybe he just didn't want to tell his dad who.)

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Review #3, by marauder5 Letters Home

5th February 2013:
I liked this story! Very nice. I think you should take a second look at it to correct a few mistakes, but overall it was a really nice read. I love their family in this story - James as a troublemaker, Albus' character and... yeah, pretty much everything. Well done :)

Author's Response: Thanks very much :) I went back and checked for the mistakes. Thanks for tell me.

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Review #4, by harrietm Letters Home

4th February 2013:
Nice little one-shot, Albus is quite cute as an ickle first year! :)
Just a few things I noticed though:
"Hello sweat heart"
Gryffindor not Griffendoor, Lily not Lilly, hippogriff bait not Hypogriff bate.
"Lilly looked shocked and appalled..." section needn't be in italics either.
But overall, I enjoyed reading :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for pointing those out! I must have had a massive brain fart when I wrote and posted this lol Thanks again :)

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