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Review #1, by PhoenixTailAndHolly In the Hospital wing

21st June 2013:
Apart from the occasional spelling or grammar mistake, I liked the story. One small mistake: Hermione tells him it is past midnight, they have a conversation that lasts at most 10 minutes, then the sun is rising, indicating it is nearly morning. Perhaps you should add a line to indicate them talking to each other about several things, to justify the lapse of time.

ps. The english use 'Err' in stead of 'Uhm'.

Rated it an 8/10, for good dialogue and fluff.

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Review #2, by D In the Hospital wing

18th February 2013:
Cute!! They were both awkward and shy which is exactly how they are in the books, so I thought you portrayed them well!

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Review #3, by ronhermione In the Hospital wing

24th January 2013:
Great story, I like it! :D

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