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Review #1, by patronus_charm Prologue

18th July 2013:
Hello there!

Ooh I thought this was a great intro to the story, though the way you ended left me wanting more. I never read one from Harry’s perspective before so I have a feeling this one’s going to be different to the others I have read. I really liked how you made it happen at Voldemort’s grave though because it’s such a peculiar thing him having one and it connects well with the fact that he may have had a more human side once.

The interaction between Harry and McGonagall was really lovely and it was nice to see them have that close relationship often depicted between them in the books. The only thing I would suggest is watch your dialogue grammar especially in regards to capitalisation as that was off at times, there are some great tutorials on the forums which should help!

A great start!


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Review #2, by Lil lily71 Prologue

18th May 2013:
I really like this story so far. I like how you have made it that Minerva is telling Harry. Really looking forward to the next chapter.

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