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Review #1, by abbeygrimm Don't Think Twice

22nd May 2013:
I admit, this wasn't as bad as I thought it would be. I
don't like Twilight but your writing isn't as stilted as
the original (which may be in part due to the
protagonist of the main story) and the plot seems
interesting.

Update?

Author's Response: abbeygrimm,

I, myself, was rather reluctant about trying my hand at a Twilight crossover, but at the same time, I was so desperate to experiment with it...I just had to brave my chances of either the idea sinking or floating.

I'm not really fond of Twilight either. I think Stephanie Meyer could've made her characters more in depth, instead of perfect, one dimensional forms. And the plot was weak. I like the idea of vampires and a normal girl getting into a forbidden relationship with one, but the characterization was what killed it. Bella was weak and hypocritcal...Edward was possessive...Jacob was just a random character whose sole purpose was just to add in pointless drama. Meyer honestly blew what could've been a good story.

As for my plot, I'm glad I captured your interest. As far as updates go, I'm planning on taking this story slow. It isn't one of my main prorities...like I said. It's an experiment. An idea I'm just going to fiddle around with. It's not exactly a story I'm so serious about, like I am with my one-shot collection, and other works. It's sort of like my other cross-over which is right now, on temporary haitus until I find the time to fix it up. Just approached with great gusto.

I will update. I promise that. But when, I just cannot say.

Thank you for giving this a chance and your review. It means much to me, as a writer.


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