I admit, this wasn't as bad as I thought it would be. I
don't like Twilight but your writing isn't as stilted as
the original (which may be in part due to the
protagonist of the main story) and the plot seems
Update?Author's Response: abbeygrimm,
I, myself, was rather reluctant about trying my hand at a Twilight crossover, but at the same time, I was so desperate to experiment with it...I just had to brave my chances of either the idea sinking or floating.
I'm not really fond of Twilight either. I think Stephanie Meyer could've made her characters more in depth, instead of perfect, one dimensional forms. And the plot was weak. I like the idea of vampires and a normal girl getting into a forbidden relationship with one, but the characterization was what killed it. Bella was weak and hypocritcal...Edward was possessive...Jacob was just a random character whose sole purpose was just to add in pointless drama. Meyer honestly blew what could've been a good story.
As for my plot, I'm glad I captured your interest. As far as updates go, I'm planning on taking this story slow. It isn't one of my main prorities...like I said. It's an experiment. An idea I'm just going to fiddle around with. It's not exactly a story I'm so serious about, like I am with my one-shot collection, and other works. It's sort of like my other cross-over which is right now, on temporary haitus until I find the time to fix it up. Just approached with great gusto.
I will update. I promise that. But when, I just cannot say.
Thank you for giving this a chance and your review. It means much to me, as a writer. Report Review
Hmmm... as a rule, I hardly ever read crossovers. I don't like them, generally. I usually don't like AU's either, but I thought I'd give this a chance because you're a great writer. :D
But so far, I'm enjoying this. :D
The only thing that I don't like about this is the nicknames. But that's just my personal opinion. :p I generally don't like nicknames in any story. So feel free to ignore me ahaha.
Anyway, I really liked this! I'll be watching it... >:)
(Also, I really like this banner - it's so pretty!)
(And I'm the number one review WOOOP!)
:DAuthor's Response: Aww, I'm glad that you're enjoying this so far. I don't like AU's either most of the time, but I thought I'd just give it a shot, just for kicks. And Twilight...I wanted to try crossing it over with it too. It's sort of an experimental project thing that I was so desperate to toy with. Unfortunately it'll be a slow process, but the second chapter is halfway complete. Now I just need time to write the other half, edit and post...which might take forever.
And nicknames. I'll try to lighten my use for them, because personally, whenever I type a nickname down, I feel like I'm adressing to a whole new different character. But I will use it whenever, let's say Emmet jokes around, because from what I can faintly recall in cannon he's quite obnoxious.
Thank you so much for the reviews, dearie. They really do make my day, and they're always so sweet! :)
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