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Review #1, by rogue_bludger

6th April 2013:

this made me tear up. i love it! you're such a talented writer!
~M
ps- i have another chapter of No Second Chances that should be up in the queue. And I could use your help/opinion with my 3rd chapter (Albus' sorting) if possible.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! Regarding your question, if you want you can pm me at the forums under the same name, but a pre-warning that I have a super clear image of Albus.

Ellie

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Review #2, by TheHeirOfSlytherin

(memories)

21st January 2013:

I have happy/sad tears. I just loved Ben, he's so sweet and just adorable and I think I missed him as much as James does at the end.

And the end, wow. I loved how you ended it. It was perfect. "James knew those memories would be enough until he saw Ben again." And that Ben will always be there. Aww.

This was so sweet and so lovely and it's being added to my favorites.

Sam.

Author's Response: Awww. :) Thank you so much for the review!

Ben is one of my favorite OC's. He's everything James isn't, and they fit together so well it's just ... I'm rambling.

It was going to be a purely happy fic, but then the challenge came along and I had to conform to one of the prompts. So that's when it became sad, but I'm so glad you liked the ending. Thank you for the amazing review, Sam!

Ellie

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