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Review #1, by Drama Ace Run Joey Run

9th February 2013:
Yay there's more chapters! This story is good, and I really can't wait to find out how the chocolate frogs tie in! Harry and Ginny are so cute :)
10/10

Author's Response: The choclate frog plan was just a back up plan, that they never actually got to use :) Thanks for reading, this was the last chapter, but I have more stories though, glad some one picked up on the Harry Ginny references thank you for the review :)

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Review #2, by Drama Ace Trouble-Maker

2nd February 2013:
Ooh I liked this chapter I can't wait to find out what the chocolate frog plan is here is my prediction: I think that the da members except for cho should start communicating with chocolate frogs and they should change the meeting time so cho is excluded. Just an idea :)

Author's Response: Ooh thanks so such for the idea, ive got a slightly different chapter planned, but i think ill change it that idea brilliant thank you :)

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Review #3, by Drama Ace I knew you were trouble

2nd February 2013:
Hi I think this will be really good there are just a couple spelling/ grammar mistakes like at one time you put quite instead of quiet but I think this is really good so far :)

Author's Response: My grammar is terrible, but i will go change those soon thanks :)

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