Just wondering, is her name a doctor who reference? Melody Pond - River song who travels in time? Anyway this chapter was thoroughly confusing - but in a good way. Really well written and definitely a bit weird. Very intrigued about the bits in italic. Good work! :) 9/10Author's Response: No her name is not a DW reference though it very well seems like it. I began writing the original version of this fic back when Tennant was still the Doctor and before we even found out River was Melody. I'm glad you like it though. Thanks for the review! Report Review
This was really good, i'm still a bit confused but i'm sure everything will be explained in the end. Really well written and from what I've read so far, its a good plot. I like that she's American and English because then the slang words are more in context (I hope that makes sense). Please update soon, this was brilliant!
9/10 :)Author's Response: Thanks so much! You have no idea how happy it makes me to know people actually like my fic. Everything most definitely will be explained eventually and I really hope the confusion lessens as the story progresses. As I am the one writing and already know what's to come I don't feel this confusion so I'll try to make things confusing only when it is absolutely necessary like in the Rabbit Hole chapter. I'll try to update as soon as possible though I can't make any promises. I'm awful at balancing my homework with my writing. Report Review
oh yeah, i am thoroughly confused after this chapter. i honestly have no idea what happened. but i guess that was intentional?
i'm hoping this means she's going to be with remus ;) is he ward in her other world? gah, who knows!!Author's Response: Yes, the confusion was entirely intentional. This chapter was meant to leave you feeling the way Melody was as all this was happening. Is Remus Ward? He very well might be but who knows? Report Review
So I really like this fic. Like really really really really. Really. I don't know, Melody is lovely and Sirius is lovely and Remus is just lovely.
I need a new word.
But it's so lovely wahhh I'm a mess.Author's Response: Lovely works... and is greatly appreciated. Thanks very much for your lovely review. I'm very glad you've enjoyed my fic thus far and hope you continue to as it progresses. Report Review
oh dear, sirius really doesn't know when to keep it in his pants, does he?
i'm definitely becoming a remus fangirl in this fic. he's so cute, i just want to hug him forever. can't wait until your next update!Author's Response: Nope. He really doesn't. He's like most of the theatre kids at my high school were. =p Next update will be coming as soon as I can type it up and edit it. Midterms are a priority at the moment, unfortunately, so I don't know how quick that'll be or how short the queue will be.
Anyway hanks so, so much for all your reviews. You totally made my day. It makes me ridiculously happy to know people are enjoying reading it as much as I enjoy writing it. Report Review
omg your ending. what's going to happen next??
i like that you have two stories in one (if that makes sense) and i love that they are now converging. and m remus, i want to be under mistletoe with him! wouldn't mind sirius either tho ;)Author's Response: Mistletoe? I sooo wouldn't mind, either, especially if they looked anything like I've always imagined them. The two stories in one thing totally makes sense and the fact that they're converging is just a way of expressing how Melody is getting the sense of how real things are since she was still suspecting the whole thing was a dream. Report Review
god, i am so in love with this story now. sirius is particularly yummy but then again so is remus. i've always been torn between the two and your descriptions of them aren't helping - i can't decide who i love more!
and word up to the poli sci classes too, that's my major!Author's Response: Poli Sci majors FTW!
Sirius and Remus are both so awesome though I've always leaned more towards Remus because his whole werewolf thing fascinates me. I've actually been contemplating writing a Remus fic somewhat modeled after Wicked because I think there's just so much to him that I'd love to explore. Report Review
e i fangirled out this chapter. i want to magically be at hogwarts now :(
i love your descriptions and dialogue too!Author's Response: I want to be at Hogwarts too! That's pretty much my biggest motivation for writing this fic. Dialogue's always come pretty easy to me but descriptions are the difficulty so it means a lot that you liked them. Report Review
i'm hooked already. i never read your original story but this one seems to be pretty good so far! melody seems like an interesting character and i can't wait to see what happens next. and i loved your trainspotting reference. a very good movie!Author's Response: Glad you like it! Trainspotting's pretty brill and it's got a great soundtrack too. Report Review
Well, you've got me hooked! Please update soon!Author's Response: Yay! Hooked is good! I am currently working on the following chapter so it should be up pretty soon. Again, thanks for reading and reviewing. So sweet of you. Report Review
I love it so far! It has a good cliffhanger ending, and great reference to Douglas Adams!Author's Response: I always like to throw in references to books and movies I love. And cliffhangers are always a good way to go too. Thanks so much for your review. I can't believe people are actually reading this...and liking it! =p Report Review
I like this. It's currently just like most Marauder stories, but I'm hoping it'll start to differ in a while. The one thing I want is Sirius to not date the main character, since that seems to happen every time. I'd like Remus to be someone's only choice for once. But, wherever you're heading with this, I think I'll enjoy it. :)Author's Response: I'm aiming to make it different from the others out there and I hope the things I've got in store for future chapters makes it stand apart. As far as Sirius goes...yeah he's usually the one to date the OCs. All I can say without giving too much away is that he's relationship with Melody is different. Super glad you like it so far and I hope you enjoy the rest! Report Review
I love stories like these. Cant wait to read more. :DAuthor's Response: Can't wait to write more! It makes me totally happy that people seem to be responding well to it. Thanks so much for reviewing! Report Review
I really want you to update!Author's Response: Soon, I promise. I'm totally working on it. :) Report Review
I really like this fanfic idea, can't wait to read more :)Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you like it! Hopefully I'll be able to post a new chapter soon. Report Review
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