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Review #1, by Athene Goodstrength Smile

16th July 2013:
Weasley fluff is the best sort of fluff ;)

This was so adorable. You did a really nice job of setting the scene in the domestic heaven that is The Burrow. I like how before a single child is even born, they're slightly chaotic. Arthur's reaction to the pregnancy is really, really lovely - in fact, I wrote a very similar dialogue between Ron and Hermione in my WIP! Haha! Like father, like son.

The relationship is very realistic to the Arthur and Molly we know, and the characterisation is similarly excellent.

I enjoyed this!

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Review #2, by ginerva_molly_weasley Smile

16th July 2013:
I really love Molly and Arthur but I can't even put into words how much I love this story. It is absolutely fantasticallistically wonderful! I even had to make up my own word to say how awesome it is!

Arthur and Molly's early life together isn't often talked about so I always wondered how they started out, whether they started out at a small house or whether they moved into the Burrow and just built their family home on top. I love that it was the latter as it shows the poverty they lived in. They wouldn't have been able to find anything else that they could afford to move to.

I also love how you had Arthur tinkering around with all of the muggle toys as it shows that even before all the children were around his love for the muggle artefacts was still there. The little bit about the flying car was very humerous considering what happened later with the Ford Angila.

Also his reaction to Molly's news is fantastic. I have always seen him like that because he is such a family man. Its awesome!!!

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Review #3, by marauder5 Smile

8th February 2013:
This was wonderful! Thank you for brightening up my afternoon (I was a little depressed because of the weather in my town, but I'm all better now!!) ;) Funny how you named your story Smile, because it definitely made me smile - maybe that's what you were going for? If so, congratulations, you've succeeded!

I loved basically everything about this one-shot, from the wonderful descriptions to the spot-on characterization. Arthur was perfect. I couldn't help but laugh at Molly's comment about making the car fly - if only she'd known that her future sons would end up flying across the country in it, and that her youngest son would crash it into a tree, almost getting himself expelled. Hilarious ;)

Anyway, you're a great writer, so just keep it up. I love to read your stories! This one gets 10/10 from me!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! All of your reviews are so lovely, and I really appreciate them! Thank you for reading so much of my stuff!

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Review #4, by Canadian_Hogwarts Smile

20th January 2013:
What a lovely story :) I really enjoyed it. I really liked the way you wrote Arthur especially. He's very sweet and absent minded, and just altogether Arthurish. And your description of the breakfast made me hungry! Nice work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for such a lovely review!

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