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Review #1, by FallenBritt A Very Weasley Christmas

11th June 2015:
Ahaha, this is a good story. Love that they are younger and just up to mischief like any young boys would be. Hugo taking just after Ron always seeming to be hungry was a good giggle for me. The fact of Scorpius being so nervous was fantastic because honestly I mean it was a just cute that he would be so nervous to go to Weasley Family Christmas. Your writing is great I could imagine clearly them cramped into the shed then struggling to get out. The boys hiding behind a tree and the idea of Albus thinking that if you just think positively it would be a better spot was very entertaining. Love it Snapdragons just love it :)

Brittany (House Cup 2015- Gryffindor)

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Review #2, by Tonks1247 A Very Weasley Christmas

11th June 2015:
AHAHAHHAHA! This was absolute fantastic! Couldn’t help but laugh at the image of Scorp, Al, and Hugo all crammed in a broom shed, afraid of being found. Gotta be terrible, being stuck and unable to move and I was definitely laughing a little too hard at the image of Scorpius sprawled out on the ground on his stomach as Al tried to get out of the shed with his dignity. Way too funny!

There were plenty of lines that I thought were fantastic, including the ‘it’ll build character’ from Al about being in the closet. Also loved how the negativity would make them visible. Oh Al, some of the things you come up with that make absolutely no sense…PRICELESS! AND! My favourite? The conversation about Pete. The fact that it came up again…it was too funny!

There were two small things:

“ hey’re not mad at us?” –They’re

Yes, Hgo, there’s still dinner. –missing u in Hugo

Besides those two smell letters missing, this was an entertaining read! It was cute and fluffy and gave me a laugh!

--Mikaela
-Ravenclaw, House Cup 2015-

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Review #3, by Lily A Very Weasley Christmas

2nd January 2014:
Loved it.

Cute story!

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Review #4, by justonemorefic A Very Weasley Christmas

12th January 2013:
I poured my tea and brought up a plate of monkey bread and pretending that it's Christmas so i AM PREPARED.

Coming out of the shed, so that's what the kids are calling it these days eh? I kid, I kid, Albus. Are you sure that's a broom, Hugo? We haven't had sight of Scorpius just yet -- ok I'll stop now :'D

Gigglesnort, tisn't a proper hiding place if it isn't horribly uncomfortable. Stop with your sense, Hughs. I am missing my childhood already. Avoiding adults because they always have questions and fuss and want to feed you things that don't taste very good; I know that feeling. ELBOWS AND SO MANY BROOMS, well it is a Quidditch playing family, and poor downtrodden Scorpius is going to die, let me love him ♥

Albus is going to be a pirate at this rate.

agfkjahg downtrodden Scorpius again in the sea of redheads. They are going to eat him alive with their freckles. They can't hate you Scorpius! You're too adorable!

Albus is such a bad-idea ringleader. Love for him too. Love for Hugo for being a sassy sensible-head who doesn't know who Pete is.

omg guffawing: There was already an immense number of Weasleys, and with the amount of noise that they made when all of them were together, it sounded like there were twice the number that there actually was. Even the quietest Weasley was louder than the average witch or wizard; projecting your voice was a necessary survival skill learned at a young age in their family. THIS IS VERY TRUE OF CHINESE FAMILIES. I have this theory that the Chinese are trained to be loud because of their restaurants. Our average voice level is shouting.

Not the whole Voldemort killing thing - because that was pretty cool oh Albus.

Besides, the way he saw it, people with ridiculous names need to stick together. you know my love of close spaces, broomstick jokes, and terrible names so well ♥

Ooh ooh, my bad idea senses are tingling. Of course Albus doesn't even bother to read the label. As all good Gryffindors don't -- EXPLOSIONS. MULTIPLYING EXPLOSIONS. You are tailoring this to my heart. Oh those silly boys. Why would you leave that lying around Geooorge.

“Hush! Your negativity is going to make us visible!” BEST LINE.

Charlie was the cool uncle YOU SERIOUSLY PUT IN EVERYTHING I LOVE. Also, Charlie is very right, it is not a proper Weasley family function without its accidents. It'd just make people antsy waiting for it.

I LOVE YOU. ♥ It was adorb and askgjhag and I could squish the three of them forever and ever. I felt so spoiled reading it, having all of my favorite things and then some in one fic c: you are magical. Thank you so much!

Author's Response: asjfkal;sw monkey bread now it really is Christmas!

(if I had been drinking tea that would have been the point where I spat it out oh my god)

There is no such thing as both an effective and a comfortable hiding place. Science. (I also have the avoiding adults down to a science.) Also Scorpius very much appreciates the love. ♥ He could use it.

Albus Severus Potter, Pirate. It has a certain ring to it.

confession: I think downtrodden Scorpius is my favorite Scorpius.

Everyone in my family is super loud, too! Only I'm not really sure what our excuse is. I think mostly everybody just likes the sound of their own voice.

Close spaces, broomstick jokes, and terrible names are the best ♥

Gryffindors don't need to read labels! Reading labels is for Hufflepuffs! (bless them) ALL THE EXPLOSIONS.

I couldn't resist writing Charlie in because Charlie is the best Weasley. -nods- And I imagine it would. There's like an accident quota that needs to be filled or something.

I'm very glad you liked it! I had a great deal of fun writing this yay so thank you for giving me the opportunity to! ♥


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Review #5, by bob A Very Weasley Christmas

11th January 2013:
Very very nicely done.

I was hooked from the first bit of the short story.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :)

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