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Review #1, by Albus Potter's Woman Prologue

1st August 2013:
Woah. This is pretty amazing tbh and I can't wait for more. Update soon please!
-Albus Potter's Woman

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

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Review #2, by aquabluez17 Prologue

6th March 2013:
Wow!! this is amazing!! I really want to know what will happen next.

In this it seemed like Al didn't really like Julie. I wonder why? I wished we had seen more of James but it was a prologue so thats all good.

Maybe if you add a bit of description about Julie/James. Just a bit, nothing too much, we could get a good view on their relationship and feel more pulled in.

I really think this idea is unique! Can't wait for you to update!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. It's always really hard to get an immediate heart to heart in prologues. In particular in this one because I really wanted to focus on the situation surrounding Julie. However, I'm planning on adding more descriptions about Julie and James.

Thank you for your review, I'm glad you liked it :)

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Review #3, by mj Prologue

27th January 2013:
love it update soon, great preview of the story

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review :)

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Review #4, by Kristina1990 Prologue

17th January 2013:
Oh wow. I'm a little confused, but I guess that's the goal of this prologue, isn't it ;)?

So, she's a muggle and in the middle of a battlefield in the Wizarding World. And she was there to see James. And why is everybody fighting?

Well, I'm sure I'll find out soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review :) I'm glad you liked it!

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