very good. SO INTENSE Report Review
Amazing! Please keep writing. I love this fanfic!Author's Response: Thank you! That means a lot!
Honestly . (im so embarrassed) i decided to read this story because one of the characters name is my name too (Alexandra) I'm sorry that that was the reason why it caught my eye but i'm really enjoying this!!Author's Response: No need to be embarrassed! And as for that being the reason you're reading it, I don't really care as long as you like it! That's what I'm trying to do. Pull people in and then suddenly crush them with my amazing writing skills ;) Report Review
Love love love it!!! You have an amazing writing style and all your characters are three dimensional and interesting. :) I can't wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: Why thank you! That means a lot! And frankly, so am I. I really hope it turns out well. Report Review
W O W so good ! cant wait for the next cchapter ... roughly how long do you think it will be?Author's Response: Well, thank you! And I have Monday off school, so hopefully soon, but bet on two weeks... Report Review
me likey :) whats the next chapter about ???Author's Response: I am horrible at guessing games, so I'm going to say... Someone who reads my fanfiction? As for what the next chapter is about, I've just submitted it, so while I should tell you to wait, I'll give you a little clue. St. Mungo's, I've Never and perhaps Sirius and Lexi in a bed with his arms around her... Report Review
Mystery Man again (I reviewed it as anonymous before I had an account). And yeah I am a guy lol. There might not be any action in it so to speak but the plot kept me interested all the way so far and the way you use different viewpoints has made the character development really impressive. Eagerly awaiting the next instalment.Author's Response: Why thank you, sugar. *southern accent* Yeah, I realize that for the male audience, who predominately like action and not romancy stuff, this fanfic may be difficult to choke down, but I am planning MAJOR action sequences, so hopefully I can keep you interested long enough to hook you completely. Thanks for the review and thanks for reading! Report Review
I love where this story is going! This is really good, and each chapter gets better and better! I love Sirius in this chapter, especially the I love girls club. Oh and I vote Charlie and carter. Lupin and her wouldn't work out anywAy. Plus I don't know it seems like they'd be good together if he could get his head out of his unmentionables.
Clea :)Author's Response: Thank you! And watch out, because the I Love Girls Club will make an appearance. And as for Carter, he is an athletic geek. He thinks with a sense of logic, so he's not one for loads of compassion. Thanks for reading and reviewing! Report Review
All right so I love this story but at the same time I'm mad at this story.
I'm just mad at Lexi. She can't have said those awful things to her best friend it's really just awful and unwarranted. Otherwise I quite like her and I like the story. I think you caught the marauders really well and it's a good story
CleaAuthor's Response: Nothing's ever really personal, darling. And yes, well, Lexi is headstrong and quite... how shall I put this... stubborn, rude, sarcastic... Because of her past (it'll be written about soon) she doesn't trust really easily, so when Charlie starts to drift away, she puts a wall up to avoid getting hurt like she has been before. Thanks for the review! Report Review
This is going really well. I wasn't 100% after the first chapter but the story is really well put together. Keep it up!Author's Response: Okay, so I'm going to assume that you are a guy because of the Mystery MAN thing. I am currently fangirling that a guy likes my story because so far, the action isn't there. It will be, but not yet. So thank you! A lot. Mucho gracias! Merci beaucoup! Thanks again. Report Review
when is the next one coming up?Author's Response: A day or two. Report Review
waiting... waiting...Author's Response: Just getting it Beta'd Report Review
I Love You And This And Decided To Do That Annoying Thing With Capitals At The Start Of Every Word!!!Author's Response: thank you stranger ;P Report Review
why are there words like bunny rabbits and frogs instead of the correct words !!! its bugging me arghAuthor's Response: I've been hacked (?) so I'm sorting it out before I post more chapters. Sorry for the delay Report Review
Next one please ! I want it ahAuthor's Response: Haha! Hopefully very soon! Report Review
I want the next chapter!!!Author's Response: Ah, well Easter (?) weekend is soon so hopefully I'll finish writing one by the end of it. :) Report Review
I think that this is AMAZING ! its so cool i love everything about it :)))Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
Awesome chapter love the story line could you please get Sirius and Lexi together please they are just made for each other I know it!!=)Author's Response: Well, they are both rather pig-headedly stubborn, so either Sirius will manage to win the bet or Lexi will shut him down. But Christmas is coming soon and I have something MAJOR planned for them. ;) Report Review
OMG! that's completely awesome! i love it!!! glad you're combining 2 points of view in one chapter.. it's perfect. I also love the use of last names (i.e. wood and jordan ;)Author's Response: I try ;) And Wood does become important, so pay attention to him! Report Review
OMGGG so god ! im not a good reviewer by the way so ill just tell you that i really like this story, also how many chapters are you planning to have?!! :)Author's Response: Thank you! And any review is a good review for me. As for chapters, I'm thinking about 40 (but I'm not sure), and that's only the first novel. ;) We still have 7th year. Report Review
You are an amazing writer and you need to update NOW please please please
KTHXBIAuthor's Response: Thanks! And I'll try to, but I've recently got a lot of homework, so it might take a little while. Report Review
Can't wait for the next one :)Author's Response: Well check back soon! I've already submitted it, it just needs to be validated! Report Review
Its very good. I like it alot. :)Author's Response: Why thank you very much! Report Review
i really like this story When will the next one be up???Author's Response: Hopefully soon but I have a whole bunch of homework at the moment. But at least two will be submitted by the end of march break!
That was so good!! I want to know what's next!Author's Response: To be honest, so do I!
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