3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by soulincantatum A Remus & Lily Story ~ Written By MarauderFelicis41

24th February 2013:
this was mainly about building dialogues... it's challenging because it's not just about copying the manner in which people talk in real life but conjuring up an utterly new way of expression that is both "fake" and convincing. admittedly you've got the skill. light smooth and self-spinning. i haven't stumbled once, nice one

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Review #2, by jamesandlily_forever A Remus & Lily Story ~ Written By MarauderFelicis41

23rd January 2013:
haha you have to stop using the prefects bathroom...I think this is a great idea showing how Lily and Remus are friends

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Review #3, by jillybeans A Remus & Lily Story ~ Written By MarauderFelicis41

14th January 2013:
i really like how this is a FRIENDSHIP story and not a ROMANCE! it shows that a boy and a girl really can be friends without dating!

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