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Review #1, by Athene Goodstrength

5th March 2013:

Hi there!

I saw the name ‘Andromeda’, the beautiful banner, and I had to click! I love stories about Andromeda as I find her to be a fascinating character, with such a tragic untold story.

This was a little different from what I expected! Twins?! It makes me wonder if this is an AU story, or something will happen to the brother that erases him from history before we ever meet the Blacks.

You do a really good job of setting the scene of the Black house - rich and comfortable, yet really oppressive. A place where a man can tell his wife who just gave birth to twins to ‘hush’!

I love that Bellatrix (I presume she’s the two year old) is already a nightmare.

It’s interesting to see how Cygnus has to think of how the birth of his children can work to his advantage - with parents like these, did the girls ever really stand a chance?

I’m looking forward to seeing where this story goes and how Andromeda breaks out from that family and environment.

Athene xo

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Review #2, by Frankie Potter

Prologue - A Cold Welcome

10th February 2013:

It was good :) Are the twins Andromeda and Sirius? Nice plot twist if they are. I don't really head out of canon but I might make an exception for this story.

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