Hi! I really enjoyed your story - very cute :) I liked how Ginny was able to boss her brothers around a little bit, I imagine she would've done exactly that!
I think you could have spent a little more time on descriptions to make the story a bit more alive, if you understand what I mean :) Other than that I really enjoyed it.
I really love Harry/Ginny stories, so even if Harry wasn't in this one I found it absolutely adorable. I would love if you'd check out my story, "19 years", and let me know what you think of it (also Harry/Ginny pairing!)Author's Response: Thanks and I will Report Review
That was actually good. I was a little skeptical at first, but I enjoyed it. Good job =] Report Review
Awww This story was so cute!!! I loved when Ginny was drawing a scar on Ron's forehead. Awesome job! Report Review
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