Hi this story is awesome!!! I thought maybe the marauders could plan a prank on the first person they see, and that happens to be lily! Oops! Or, maybe Sirius gets a howler from home. Hurryupandwritemoreiamreallyexcited thesisthebeststoryinhpffAuthor's Response: haha thanks for the enthusiasm! i am working on it dont worry!
thanks for r/r!
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I love these. They are really good!!! Pretty soon the marauders have to find out about Remus though. And just a tidbit of info: James was smart. He was inately smart.
And you might want to show Snape having death-eater friends. But I guess that could wait a while.
And James isn't all bad you might wanna stress that some more too.
I'm a Harry potter lover so of course I want the charectors like the book and you do a fairly good job at it. Keep writing!!!Author's Response: THANK YOU for the review! it was super helpful and i'm so grateful for your opinions! in response to your uber helpful tips...
1. of course, i want to stick to the books as much as possible, but i have to make the characters work for my story as well. and
2. don't worry, james talks about school and being nice to people in the next chapter! also,
3. i pictured snape turning to "the dark side" a few years in, not right off the bat. he's going to have to slowly earn the respect of the death eaters.
once again THANK YOU for reading and extra thanks for the review! Report Review
I absolutely loved the last little section when they were in the boats - it was truly hilarious! The general interaction between the characters prior to that was great and you integrated the quotes from DH really well.Author's Response: thank you!!! Report Review
I think an invisibility cloak should be in the box - James is about the right age and they're going to need it for their shennanigans :)
I love it so far :) Funny dialouge :) Please write more pranks - I especially like the idea of Filch and a zoo of animals XD
Adventures... hmm... well they have to make friends with Hagrid so the forbidden forest?
The whomping willow to discover the shrieking shack which is their hideout?
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Squidy? Really? I prefered Captian Suction Cup.
But it's good, and funny so I forgive you :)
The characters are coming more to life and James is exactly the arrogant yet loveable idiot I imagined.
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Funny and original - I've always wanted to see something done with the Mauraders.
I liked the POV of the different characters too, it really helps you get to know them.Author's Response: I LOVE YOU GIRL! YOU WROTE ME FOUR REVIEWS! NEW BEST FRIEND!!! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR THOUGHTS AND SUCH! THEY REALLY HELP ME OUT AND GET ME MOTIVATED TO WRITE MORE. AND AS FOR THE PRANKS... STAY TUNED FOR CHAPTER SIX IS FULL TO BURSTING WITH THEM!
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!
JILLY (WHO IS SUPER EXCITED FROM RECEIVING REVIEWS AND FORGOT HOW TO TURN OFF THE CAPS LOCK!!!) Report Review
I think inside the box there should be the invisibility cloak! And then you should have the boys be all confused and have it be stuck to like James's arm or something and the chapter title should be: in which James's arm disappears! Just a random idea :DAuthor's Response: that is genius. literally. i might possible steal it. maybe. probably. and THANK YOU SO MUCH for your lovely reviews and for answering my random questions! they just made my entire day and have motivated me to go write more marauders! KEEP BEING AWESOME!!!
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I like this story a lot it's super funny! Now I'll use your review provoking questions :) my favorite thing/line was the siriusicle, I don't think this chapter needs to be improved, and as for the adventures, anything with James and lily should be funny!
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Loving it so far!can't Wait to read the following chapters!Author's Response: Yay! I'm so glad you love it! I will try to post my newest chapter this weekend Report Review
It was really good, just like the rest!Author's Response: thank you!! Report Review
I can't wait to read more! Report Review
It was really good!! Report Review
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