Great job~ I can tell that Ronnie is no Mary Sue, and I like how Remus is acting more like a teenager instead of an old man... (like you see in most fanfics) :D ~ I look forward to another chapter!Author's Response: Yay! Thank you for your comment.
Im glad you liked it, and that you enjoy the characters so much. :D
The 2nd chapter should be coming out pretty soon ;) Report Review
Well done! You are very good at characterization, and I'm into what I see so far. Good structure, and I like the witty dialog. Very entertaining =) I'm a sucker for Remus/OC's, and look forward to what you have in store.Author's Response: Glad you liked it! It brings us much happiness to know that you've enjoyed are little story. I hope you stay tuned and see what we have in store :) Report Review
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