Reading Reviews for Summer's Where It Began
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Review #1, by zipzin Chapter nine

28th February 2013:
Not sure where to start on this chapter. It's always interesting to see how people write the death of both Lily's and James' parents. That sounds so bad. I think you did a good job with this this chapter.

So I have a question. Since I'm guessing this only goes for the summer before seventh will there be a sequel to do the school year? Or what?

Author's Response: Yes there will be a sequel. I just haven't got a title for it yet...

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Review #2, by tyson123g Chapter 7

4th February 2013:
Nice take on the story and sorry for your loss.

Author's Response: Thank you for your condolences and your review

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Review #3, by zipzin Chapter 7

3rd February 2013:
Ahh. Death sucks and I hope that your great-grandmother was an awesome person. This is good as always and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Next chapter is on its way. Updating is kinda hard though as I almost broke my wrist yesterday :/

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Review #4, by zipzin Chapter 6

2nd February 2013:
Yay for the quick update! I really am liking all of this character development! Lily's dad seems pretty awesome. Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: I had a lot of chapters already written for this story so I updating pretty quickly. Once I get up to as far as i've written things will slow down a little as I'm back at school as of tomorrow and It's my final year so its pretty important. But I will try to update as often as possible. :) Glad your enjoying the story

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Review #5, by zipzin Chapter 5

1st February 2013:
That was unexpected. I suppose Lily didn't really want to makea scene or amything but I suppose having a sister who really hates you can prevent you from getting rid of a person who might be friendly with you at a party. Love it so far, keep up the good work!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I like to think that it wasn't just James who matured for 7th year that Lily had to do a bit of growing as a person too. Next chapter is up for submission.

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Review #6, by Twinkle Chapter 4

28th January 2013:
Update please!! Eager to read the next chapter!! Love it!! :D xx

Author's Response: Yay glad you love the story and thanks soo much for reviewing. Next chapter is already up for validation. :)

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Review #7, by zipzin Chapter 4

28th January 2013:
Duh duh duh. Sirius figured it out and now James knows and uh-oh this next chapter is going to be interesting. Update soon please!

Author's Response: Ha ha I am so pleased you're still reading and reviewing! :) Next chapter is already up for validation. So hopefully won't be long!

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Review #8, by zipzin Chapter 3

22nd January 2013:
Great chapter as usual! Can't wait until James and Sirius see Lily or something! (I assume it's the next chapter?) Keep this up I can't wait to read more and you are doing some great writing!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. Of course it couldn't be long before Lily bumps into them and you are correct to assume it's in the next chapter ;) It up for validation as I type, should be up in a couple of days. Glad to see your enjoying the story :)

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Review #9, by hpffisawesome Chapter Two

15th January 2013:
Harsh...well written though! Update soon! Very soon!

Author's Response: Yay two reviews :) I have the next chapter already submitted it should be up in a day or so. I have several chapters already written for this story.

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Review #10, by hpffisawesome Chapter One

15th January 2013:
You've got me hooked! I'm curious to see where you go from here. I like the POV changes, keeps things varied and interesting.

Author's Response: Well thank you :)

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Review #11, by zipzin Chapter One

6th January 2013:
Interesting. I'm excited to see how this will all play out. I didn't spot any little errors so keep that up and the only thing that I would change would be to make it say just "James" instead of "James point of view" because I think it's kind of implied that it's his point of view. This looks like a great story and please update soon because I really want to see how this all pans out. Keep writing this was really good!

Author's Response: I've already got several chapters already written they just waiting to be posted. Thanks so much for your review and I'm glad your liking the story so far.

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