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Review #1, by Emily Weasley Er...An Introduction...

6th January 2013:
I don't think I've read a story like this before. I think you did a good job staying true to the characters personalities. That being said, it was sort of confusing for me as a reader to differentiate who was the one speaking. Also, it's hard to really understand what us going on because you haven't really included much use of sensory details. The concept that your using in your story is unique to a lot of other stories on this site. I hope you have this review in mind when you write the future chapters.

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