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Review #1, by MyMyMiss Remembered

18th March 2014:
The curse was broken omg! so glad Everyone finally could see Ariel, and her Father and Mother pfft, what would you even call family to that? Seriously.

But the bravery she showed by taking that curse for Harry! oh my god, she saved him! I loved the characterization of your OC here, I thought it was an amazing story to read! I love how you described the battle in little detail but you could still see everything that you wrote it was all there.You could see it so clearly, and I thought that was great!!

I really liked the premise of the story as well as the build up, and the creativity behind your plot.

Great story!



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Review #2, by adluvshp Remembered

7th March 2014:
Blackout Battle 15/15

I think this was a very interesting story. I liked your characterisation of Ariel.
The backstory of her itself was very unique and oh so sad.
Throughout the narrative, I could connect with Ariel and felt for her. She had such a sad life and it was so sweet how she finally felt she could be remembered because of the battle for actually saving Harry.
I think this was a unique concept and I enjoyed this refreshing read.
Over all, your descriptions and characterisation was nicely done.

Great job!

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Review #3, by Brittney Remembered

2nd January 2013:
Yay!! This is really cool. I'm so glad someone saw her!

Author's Response: Brittney,

I'm glad you liked this. I couldn't let it end on a bad note. Thank you for reading and taking the time to review!



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Review #4, by Dark Whisper Remembered

1st January 2013:

This is very different and very creative and sad, really. You know how much I love reading sad fiction, right? I love something that gives me that 'awe' moment and you certainly delivered.

You gave us a very unique backstory... a girl that could not be remembered because of a jealous witch long ago. She was most certainly 'Cursed' and with something that was very interesting and refreshingly different. I'm not sure if the curse was given to you in the challenge or it was your idea, but regardless, you wrote it really well.

You broke my heart when you wrote that she... "finally done something that was truly memorable." Awe... boo hoo. ;( It actually had me wondering if I've ever done anything to be remembered... other than for embarrassing moments, I don't think so. :/

It is right and wonderful that she be remembered for saving Harry. Wah!

I could imagine the sadness this girl's life must've been. It is beyond the norm and wonderfully unique and believable as it is set in the magical world.

I wish you much luck with this challenge.

Thanks for this unique read...
Dark Whisper

Author's Response: Dark,

Thank you for reading my little one shot. Yes, it was for a challenge and I really liked the idea behind the challenge.

I think that some people are handed the short end of the stick at a young age and do what they can to defeat what drags them down. I really hope that I showed that in this story. I think that we don't truly know what happened at the final battle. Someone unknown could have saved Harry. JK gives us room for imagination!! :)

Thank you again for reading and leaving another awesome review!!


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