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6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by D

18th February 2013:

So sweet! I loved it! I think it's a clever plot and I enjoyed how they finally got to discuss that day with each other.

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Review #2, by Ron_The_King

Chapter 1

12th February 2013:

nice line at the end: "courage was not the absence of fear, but the triumph over it" ..and very intense one shot :)

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Review #3, by 11whimsy

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11th January 2013:

WHOO! thought that was one good one-shot. it wasn't boring or stupid but instead fairly original and touching. I can't think of a lot of feed back other than maybe change the ending to some thing a tad bit more profound. the story builds up excellently and then kind of ends on a plateau, if you get my slightly disjointed metaphor. Anyhow, good work! ya got talent! :)

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Review #4, by WittyandCreative

Chapter 1

11th January 2013:

It's just such a sweet story. I really do love it very much, it's one of my absolute favourites.

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Review #5, by Headless Huntsman

Chapter 1

9th January 2013:

I liked this a lot. This is not the first story of this type I have read (I've even written one myself :P) but you have a very good grasp on Ron and Hermione's relationship.

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Review #6, by unknownhorcrux

Chapter 1

9th January 2013:

Hi! I really love the story. It's a really sweet idea and I think it captures both characters really well. It could do with a tiny bit of proof reading. Just little things like, 'He stared his dusty hands'. Just reading it over carefully would really help little things like that.
A sweet, thoughtful story - well done!

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