Hey! Its Mya here =)
This is amazing! I loved the relationship you described between ScoRose and I just loved you built the whole story up.
Great work !
I can't wait to see the next update and great banner. Report Review
Molly, Molly, Molly, Molly,
Oh am I the first reviewer of this fantastic novel which I'm going to be stuck on like a leech? Fantastic! Molto bene!
Hello! So I'm here to basically review swap all your stories one by one. The first is your very interesting novel's first chapter which is just wow. I loved this you know? It's really shocking to know that this is your first ScoRose fic, because oh gosh, my first was like burnt food. Anyways, you've actually written this *really* well. The characterization is spot-on, the plot is wonderful, the writing is so fitting, and just perfect for the story.
I found the mutual hate-hate just spot-on, like actually spot-on. You've got them in that light of that reluctance and you've developed the characters so well that it feels really vivid. One thing I really liked (and which I do not excel at) is how you managed to not use dialogues in a huge cluster and just also used to them to add depth to Scorpius and Rose.
Oh the plot is CAPTIVATING.
I've read many "I need to get out of all this so act like my fake wife/husband!" fics, and I must say they were big guilty pleasures because they weren't that... good. But I actually, really am genuinely enraptured by the direction it may be heading to. I think I'm going to really enjoy reading this.
Only one spelling mistake I noticed: provieded = I think you mean provided?
Just a tip, in ScoRose fics, the main key is the characterization of them, if you can do that really well (which you have done fantastically) you have your key to success :) So I would just suggest in the later chapters, read them very well, because it really helps that plot development and that feeling that bases a good novel.
I feel my reviews are mostly fangirling and informal. So, pardoneth it okay? And keep me updated! I'd love to read and review the rest.
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